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Reviews for Returning Home

By : Daydreamer79
  • From lara5170 on October 01, 2015
    This was another great 1. The only thing that could have made it better is if it as longer.
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  • From Smailii1805 on October 27, 2010
    Well,

    for me the story was rather dissatisfying. It was very well written and had a nice concept behind it. But in the end it was just another of those PWPs. It's not that I don't like reading those as well; I just hate it when stories pretend to have a plot and conflicts when their only goal is the sex.

    The lemon was hot, the plot was a disappointment. What about the fact that Sasuke wasn't honest with Naruto? What about those TEN YEARS they spent apart?! What about his incestuous relationship wiht Itachi? Is that just meaningless in the face of getting those three intp bed with each other a.s.a.p.? If it was, just skip it and make this PWP. If you take your plots serious, let it have an actual influence on the story.

    Greetings
    Frühling
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  • From cynaga on October 19, 2009
    tight. . .
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  • From arabuzumaki on October 19, 2009
    Itachi can give me medication anytime rofl ^_^
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  • From NarutoVixin on October 19, 2009
    well now thats one hell of a homecomeing lol well done thanks
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  • From ANON - Anon on October 19, 2009
    That was so hot!! I love this story! I love all your stories! I can't wait until you update again. Ja Ne!
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  • From butterflies1974 on October 18, 2009
    You write brilliand 'SIN' I loved it even though it was one chapter you made a complete story. I was very satisfied at the end. Poor Naruto didn't have a chance with those two.
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