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Reviews for Days that end in Y

By : momhuey8
  • From animeaddict666 on October 21, 2009

    "crazier than a sack of weasels." YEE GODS, I almost died at this line! I had to clamp a hand over my mouth lest I disturb my fiancé!

    I ADORE the imagery of Sai painting a crotch-rubbing ink cat based on Neji’s descriptions. LOL. And this line -- “not too surprising considering that Sai had a large black hole where normal people stored their instincts about boundaries” – was SO Sai. I love the way you’ve characterized them.

    “His ninja training was too deeply ingrained to allow him to easily tune out the extraneous noises and activity and still relax.” Good point. Added to the realism. And this kind of kink is so Naruto, it made me giggle.

    “days that end in y” < -- This line I worship!!!! WORSHIP!!!

    Okay, I don’t usually go for corny love confessions, but the way you described Naruto’s compliments effect on Sasuke…that was awesome. And THEN you turned it around with “Can I be your family?” and that insightful line about GETTING more from giving...I loved that.

    That was a very enjoyable read. You do humor VERY well. I laughed outright at least a dozen times!

    CRIT: I will say there were times when it was confusing to read, because the POV switched. And some of the affectionate things were a LITTLE out of character, even for Zrina’s more compassionate Sasuke.

    All in all, though, I thoroughly approve!

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  • From nivell on October 12, 2009
    Hot sex within a lovely story. Great read!
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  • From ANON - Angel on October 11, 2009
    Wow! I am a gigantosaurus FAN, I mean FANGIRLGLEEING FAN of SoD! To read your story started me on that whole journey again and its epic proportions ;).

    It was simple, short and hilarious with Neji and Sai's spytactics LOL, above all it packed the emopower that was SoD, the notion of family, falling in love without being aware of it inspite of oneself, having something sneak up on you that was better than all you lived for. It was beautifully poignant.

    Heck it was also really HOTT and spiiicy.
    Basically it is all that turns me to mush :) Thank you


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  • From ANON - Kk on October 11, 2009
    Hello ^^ I'm really digging this one-shot of yours! Really well written and great smut! I think its awesome that you did this for Zrina! I bet she appreciates this a lot and I think you have something going here! I can see you being the next best thing! I just hope you'll keep writing since, and its ashame, nobody reviews anymore!Why? What happened? Seriously this is a down right shame because we're losing authors...Anyway! KEEP WRITING! I'll be sure to read more of your stories! Thank you!
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