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  • From hieisdragoness18 on November 24, 2009
    yay!!! oh i really hope naru will be okay soon. i think it's just hard for fans to see him brought down the way he has been and so they don't like it. i must say i did feel bad for naru mostly because his insecurities are relatable and its hard not to put yourself in the characters shoes sometimes.
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  • From luvesskiki on November 24, 2009
    I've been following both stories and I think they are amazing.

    Screw everyone else who thought the attacks were taking too long. I loved them (in a morbid kind of way) and actually thought we would see more. Lolz, the way you wrote this absolutely amazing and I can't wait for the next chapter. Maybe now Sasuke will find out it was Sakura's fault, the little whore. (I really don't like her >.
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  • From JtheChosen1 on November 23, 2009
    Very intense here as always! Great job!
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  • From Sigart on November 21, 2009
    Oh gawd. I think I'm going to be sick. Seriously. What Sakura's doing is.. it's... I don't have words for how monstrous it is.

    The story is brilliant btw. Keep it up.
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  • From ANON - rala on November 21, 2009
    This is so depressing! Naruto is amazingly perfect the way he is and he shouldn't feel this sad. Make them happy again damn it >.< It's hard to read this story because it so sad, can we have everything be good again? Please. Sasuke and Naruto should me happy. That should happen and Sakura should die...right now. I blame her for all the sadness. Please write more soon! You are doing a good job...just more happy. Please. With sugar on top?
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  • From serenagold on November 21, 2009
    omg!! this story is getting seriously scary! o_o
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  • From xkuramaxhieix on November 20, 2009
    Angst overload.
    Good, but bad cause some parts are kinda choppy.

    I'm happy that there's an update though! ;D
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  • From ANON - qwerty on November 20, 2009
    Finally Tsunade checked Naruto's health!! Good God, I can't stand the tension and anticipation anymore. I hope Sakura gets what's coming to her ten-fold.
    Amazing writing as always. Great chapter!
    Keep going!

    p.s. I want to read the other story "constellations" but I'm afraid of the major character death warning. I don't mind if the death is someone like Sakura, Tsunade, etc but if it's Naruto or Sasuke....no can do. Could you tell me if the death is someone other than Naruto or Sasuke? Thanks.
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  • From arabuzumaki on November 20, 2009
    omg even with the cuffs off he can't fight it. Will this be permanent damange >.>
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  • From Dorkchic on November 18, 2009
    By the way. I am actually reading both stories. I am continually impressed with how you are able to draw in the fans of both light and dark...especially considering you are doing it with two stories that had identical beginnings! Also to be able to evoke different, yet equally strong emotional responses is indicative of an excellent writer, please keep it up! I am on pins and needles on both counts!
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  • From Dorkchic on November 18, 2009
    Absolutely hideous things need to happen to Sakura! The girl is obviously deranged if she can not only do that to some one who has saved her miserable existance more than once, but to so on a continual basis- in essence, torturing him to death. There is no "Oops, I was in the moment and completely out of my mind for a second there. I don't think I even realized what I was doing." On a side note... Why hasn't Sasuke examined him with the sharingan? You would think that with him being a genius and Naruto continually being out of it he would have at least checked and seen evidence of long term exposure to repeated genjutsus. Heck, even if Naruto had not referenced things that had not been said or done in real life then just the continual headaches and sleeping should have set him off. If nothing else, why not talk to Tsunade about his case if he is so concerned? She does know that they are together and even if that weren't the case Naruto is supposed to be his guard. Sorry, I get on a rant sometimes about things I am very interested in. Please, please, please update soon! I have to know what happens and I hope it involves something happening to that pink-haired harpy that involves a the rest of her lifetime with a colostomy bag and dribbling when she speaks. People who betray trust like that need to live out reletively short, meaningful, pain-ridden lives strapped to a metal table under Ibiki's careful watch. Yeah, serious tangent there! LOL
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  • From hieisdragoness18 on November 16, 2009
    come on sasuke figure it out!
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  • From ANON - Anon on November 16, 2009
    Okay I'm finding myself skipping all the sakura stuff and only reading narusasu interaction....I just want you to have sasuke find out what the bitch is doing and put her in a horrible terrible torturous gengutsu for the rest of her life....PLEASE Kill the bitch already!! I'm sorry I'm just too pissed at her to care...a sign of a good story is that it elicits emotions from the reader right??
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  • From ANON - ALovingAbscurity on November 16, 2009
    i love love love these stories!
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  • From arabuzumaki on November 16, 2009
    omg Naru is geting prety bad and poor Sasu is confused :( this version of the story gets me really angry and sad. Are they going to find out when it's too late :s
    I'm so loving this keep it up ^_^
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