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Reviews for Constellations (complete)

By : momhuey8
  • From JtheChosen1 on December 08, 2009
    Very nice chapter here and with 'All In'! The time jump really flowed here, and it seems like things are finally turning around!
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  • From hieisdragoness18 on December 08, 2009
    GAARA!!! love gaara!
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  • From Twiggies on December 08, 2009
    Ooh, they are going to have babies!!
    Heh, good to see that the three of them are still together, even after a year.

    I wonder what the next time skip is going to bring.
    I hope you keep writing and update soon again!
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  • From serenagold on December 08, 2009
    :D

    After so much crap... HAPPIEST CHAPTER EVER!! Awwww....


    Keep up the good work! ^^
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  • From NarutoVixin on December 08, 2009
    there better be more babys from the other 2 this time
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  • From NarutoVixin on December 05, 2009
    well done i will be keeping an eye on bot tales and watching for updates for them both tho i for one like this one better so far then its mate
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  • From xkuramaxhieix on December 04, 2009
    The 'inspect your sperm' line really had me laughing. It was hilarious.

    As for your note at the bottom, don't. You don't have to explain yourself that much. By the way, how many chapters will this story have?
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  • From serenagold on December 03, 2009
    Wow. 60 chapters. Thats a hell of a lot to look forward to. The fact that the main conflict hasn't even taken place yet is an exciting thing. It already feels like the story is drawing to a close when it really has only just begun. I'm totally loving this story and I look forward to where you go with it. Keep up the great work.

    (Now I'm off to read that upsetting mind-fuck of yours All In. What horrible twist of depression will await me then? God, I hope they can fix Naruto. But I digress. This review is the wrong forum for such contemplations. lol)
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  • From arabuzumaki on December 03, 2009
    I love the fact that Neji is in the mix now XD. This story really lifts my mood especially in this hectic exam period :/ The most important thing is that you pace the story to your liking, when the writer is happy and comfortable so will be the readers :D
    And I really love the fact that Neji is with them I hope it stays that way until the end. My humble request to you as a 'daughter to mother " XD
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  • From ANON - animelover on December 03, 2009
    ok, normally i am skeptical about threesomes, but you've made this one humorous and dramatic. i'm trying to guess at the character death, because when an author warns you ahead of time about it, the character who gets it is not who you expected.

    thanx for sharing this fic and being so quick to update ... you rock!
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  • From ANON - Anon on December 03, 2009
    Hello...I've been a bit disturbed by how invested people have gotten with your plot for this story, and how upset they are becoming...I have to say I had the same reaction with the way Sakura was abusing Naruto in All In, but I was confident that even if I cried buckets and wanted to stab Sakura's fictional eyes with a fictional knife...your story was still yours to do with what you liked and my job was to bear with the plot in places that made me cringe and enjoy all the twist and turns that came with it. But then again I am a fan of good fiction and this has been a creative piece of fiction.

    I hope that you continue to post the story the way that it is written and that you stay true to your creative genius. I've cried and laughed, and (in all truth cursed Sasuke a little), but I've enjoyed the story. Thanks for sharing your work with us and I hope you continue to write and share some more when these two stories come to and end. I too am an older writer, but I enjoy my fluff and that is what most of my stories will be....so I appreciate authors that take me to the angsty corner of emotion. Thanks again.
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  • From ANON - Angel on December 02, 2009
    I think I'll leave this story now. I'm a romantic I can't help the notion, the belief that you can only share a certain depth of love for one person, that intimately. You are again expanding the notion of family but I think it's far too big a chasm for me to believe and continue with. Skimmed the last few chaps where it was now all threesome, sigh but it doesn't seem to be letting up. I am so utterly disappointed in Sasuke.

    So Naruto loves Sasuke enough to see him completely lose himself into, to and for someone else, I get that. But Sasuke? He's absolute rubbish! For him to believe that is preposterous considering he intially allowed Neji in to better teach him how to love Naruto. Now he has confirmed Naruto is not all open arms about the situation but he continues on the outward belief it's for Naruto.

    Huh?

    Feeling rather sore about this but I cannot fault your writing nor your perceptions. You have a right to stretch any and all boundaries as you please within this medium, it's just too far wide for me to accept :) I look forward to Sakura getting her comeuppance in All In and hopefully no threesomes there he he he.

    Cheers,
    Angel
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  • From JtheChosen1 on December 01, 2009
    Great work here-you have a gift with putting so much emotion into the words here!
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  • From Prism0467 on December 01, 2009
    I do hope the three of them can remain together. It's a beautiful alliance.
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  • From ZeroZoey on December 01, 2009
    not sure if I like the stories as much as I use to, seems you pushed Naruto completely out and now it seems Sasuke is having an affair with Neji, I will try but you might have to make them make a choice or something, to show love to Naruto you cannot push him out like it seems, (esp the sex )just kinda miss the feel in the first couple of chapters when you knew they loved each other now since Naruto is not enough for Sasuke is it love?
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