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By : momhuey8
  • From ANON - richon on February 18, 2010
    i really enjoy reading this story? i couldnt' stop crying when naru died. i was so sad but the next chapter remember we are not alone. take care and se you soon with another story !!
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  • From xkuramaxhieix on February 18, 2010
    First of all, I'd like to say that I'm glad your cancer is in remission. Moving on to your story...

    It felt too short, and too long at the same time. I don't know if I'm making sense or not, but there's something about the last set of chapters that felt too long, but other parts felt too short. Also, some parts were unnecessarily long that I felt could have been shorter. I really enjoy your stories, really, I do... but for some reason, 'All In' needed to be lengthened and Constellations could have been shortened.

    All in All, very good, and I look forward to your future works.

    By the way, I'm glad you've decided to write a SasuNaru fic with Sasuke in stiletto heels and Naruto in a wedding gown. ;D
    I'm totally kidding of course. ;)
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  • From NarutoVixin on February 18, 2010
    *bows low* my mother is getting the test to see how her cemo went on Monday. i had moved out of state 4 years ago and had just come home back in July she was told in Aug and they opreated in Sept. i now ware a pink band for her. im glad you are cancer free and can also tell you that this tale is one that has kept me going when im a state away from her in her time of need. i have had to be the rock for her and my father while being close to the coast. thank you for sharing something so personal to you with the rest of the world.
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  • From LadyWolf on February 17, 2010
    All I have to say is great story! I've read this from the beginning and waited each week for a new and exciting chapter to post...

    I nearly cried when the main character died, I usually do not read death fics, but this fic is not about death but about life and how you go on with you life with those you love surrounding you.

    I am so happy that you are cancer free...may all your days be as blessed as the next...

    Once again Great Fic!!!
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  • From Tinachan on February 17, 2010
    Hi I read all of your fic before to send you a review .So that is my opnion, the fic was very well elaborated, all the history since the first chapter got growing with imaginatiom and a great dose of reality .

    During the time I was reading it I could feel that you were sharing a bit of your life with us.
    And after to read the last chapter and your note I could understand the feelings that you past to me.

    So thank you for share your soul with us, and the idea of MEMORIAL was great becouse we become imortals since someone can remember that one day we had lived here and had observed the same constelations that they are observing today...

    Thank you

    Kisses and Hugs

    Tina
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  • From Prism0467 on February 17, 2010
    I had cancer once too. I am cancer free now too.

    Congratulations.
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  • From ANON - Jit Jones on February 17, 2010
    This was one of the greatest stories I think I have ever read. It made me cry through the last few chapters, but it was impossible to tell if it was because I was happy or sad. The characters were written in a way that made them seem so real, it was like you could reach out and touch them. That was what drew such an emotional reaction. It never would have had that impact if we didn't love every aspect of the characters, and that can be hard to pull off. You did so flawlessly. This was absolutely beautiful, Thank You for giving us this wonderful story.
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  • From arabuzumaki on February 17, 2010
    I have loved this story from the start. I'm sad to see it end, but all things do :/ I'm happy that you are cancer free *hugs* Neji's breakdown was so expected, he has been the rock of the family for so long.
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  • From Dorkchic on February 17, 2010
    Small correction. I accidentally left out a word in my last review which makes it mean something different than what I intended. What I intended to say was that I was not upset that you ended the story where you did. You had commented that so people had said that you should have ended the story with Naruto's death. I just wished that you had continued the story a little further to the reunion. Sorry for any confusion my wording may have caused.
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  • From Dorkchic on February 17, 2010
    I am so happy to hear about the prognosis and hope that you have many happy healthy years ahead of you. As for the story... Well, several of the chapters literally made me sob like a baby. It was told in such a personal, intimate way that I could not help but empathize and, as a result, feel their pain. The only thing that I do not wish that you had ended it with Naruto's death. Instead I would have liked for you to end it with a reunion with Sasuke. I loved the chapters showing how the family coped and went on after his passing, but something in me called for the unbridled mushiness that would be the reunion between soulmates- be it in some version of heaven or as reincarnations. I guess I was just hoping to know that they did find each other again and were able to be together forever without all the suffering.
    On a lighter note- I kind of hope that Sakura was reincarnated as a dung beetle.
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  • From ANON - Anon on February 17, 2010
    Just left you an annon. Review...sorry should have logged in....didn't want you to think that I did not want to leave my name on that review. Thank you so much for sharing...

    Your Humbled Fan!
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  • From ANON - Anon on February 17, 2010
    Thank you so much for this story. I loved both from the beginnig and I cried buckets and laughed and cried again. It was lovely. I am 39 years old and I have lost a few people to cancer in my life, as well as seen family members over come the bitch that is cancer. That is the reason that I am now enrolled in an Accelerated Nursing Program, my own encounter with cancer and what it can do has altered my life, and surped me to become a nurse who will specialize in Oncology treatment....I have to do my part to help those who have to fight that fight.

    I respected you so much as a writer now I respect you as a strong person, willing to share such a hurtful time of your life with us.

    Always Humbled by you.
    Sukenaru
    Kanazerosukenaru
    P.R.
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  • From Kerrisa on January 23, 2010
    Nooooooo! Darn these people from learning from their mistakes!!! *throws a mini tantrum* Sasuke is not going to like this at all! But at least he got rid of one base. I'm interested in finding out how you're going to explain who these people are, why they are after his demon, and how they are pulling it off. I'm looking forward to the next chapter! XOXOXs Kei-Chan
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  • From ANON - chickigirl on January 21, 2010
    OMG YOU'RE ACTUALLY GOING TO KILL NARUTO!!! *crying* plz plz plz plz plz plz plz don't kill him! I don't think I could stand it. They were all finally starting to be happy together! this story is awsome plz keep writing!
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  • From NarutoVixin on January 17, 2010
    about time he stopped being all emo and got off his ass to help
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