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Reviews for Constellations (complete)

By : momhuey8

From KageKyuura on February 08, 2017
Hahaha I'm so glad that Naruto called upon Kyuubi and used the Kyuubi's chakra to burn Sakura. She'll never be the same! Serves that bitch right! God I hate Sakura...

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From ANON - on July 08, 2016
First off this maybe late but I so love your story. I almost cried when naruto died... I think the story hurt even more in the end with your last notes. I am so glad your a good statistic and not a less fortunate one.
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From ANON - Aingyl on October 21, 2015
Re-read this for the 3rd time and it still made me cry. You are fantastic.
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From ANON - Animelvr on December 13, 2014
I remember reading this years ago. And it is still as beautiful as the first time I read it. Thank you so much for sharing the story with us!
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From HalfFallenAingyl on December 11, 2011
Ok. So. I have only two things to say about your story, and no matter what it sounds like at first, they're both good.

I hate you because you made me cry off and on through the last 5 chapters.

I adore you because you made me cry off and on through the last 5 chapters.

Ok, so I have 3 things to say. PLEASE don't stop writing if you can help it. You are an amazing author with a tremendous amount of talent. I can't say I've read any stories where Naruto DIES-dies. The story was addictive, beautifully written, and that twist towards the end was beyond unexpected. I can't come up with the words to describe how much I enjoyed reading Constellations, so this review will just have to suffice.
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From Hotanimeguysfan on September 15, 2010
Chap. 24
No. Stop.�

�What�s wrong?�

�Can�t you feel it? He needs us.�

This just broke my heart!!!

Runs off to have a good cry!!! T_T

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From Hotanimeguysfan on September 15, 2010
Chap. 23 Sasuke and Neji all over each other and Naruto watching just breaks my heart!!! T_T
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From Hotanimeguysfan on September 15, 2010
I first read All In and cried and raged at Sakura more times than I can count!! I find it such an emotional roller coaster and the pain it makes you feel just about knocks you out!!! I started reading it and just coudn't stop!!! Then I came here right away and went to chap 14 to go on with this story looking forward to a spin that would make up for all the grieving I felt in reading All In....All In really pushed and pulled my emotions all over the place and me crying for a ray of light that it would get better!!

I've read this for awhile and was getting sadder the longer I read it.....have to admit....I had to take the chicken way out and jumped to the last chap. and back track.....(I should have realized the truth before ......when ever my sister loves a story and cries about it but does not tell me a hint....it usually means someone I adore is going to die.) I'm glad I read it this way....other wise you would have heard my crying and begging for it to go how I expected it to be. I just feel my heart break every time Naruto tries to push them together and live in the pain hes living in cause he's doing it for Sasuke and Sasuke's future. I can't handle Sasuke's ease in wanting Neji there with them. It just screams such a betrayal to Naruto that I find myself wishing Naruto to just say screw you and leave both Sasuke and Neji to themselves as they seem so happy together. Naruto is in pain and it just kills me!! (I know from experience what its like to live with someone that cheats on you with others and it kills you inside and you try to pretend your don't see whats going on and that your ok and its not bothering you and keep living just to keep your family together. Ugh just shoot me)

I just think Loraney that you are an amazing woman and mom and I can only admire your personal courage, strength and the skills you have in life and in writing stories that cause your readers to FEEL the trendous emotions that you create with your words!!! You've made me cry and grieve many times over this week and bring up emotions that to review earler was just too painful to do. You know those moments that you can't even put into words just how much something makes you feel!! You have a wounderful gift with words and I can't thank you enough for putting up your stories here for the rest of us to read!!

I pray for your health and happiness with your family and hope you know how much we your readers love you too!!!I just love your works....even if at the moment I want to stomp all over a certain Uchiha....sniff...T_T...sniff but still its AMAZING!!!! I look forward to all your future works!!! :) Please never stop writing!!!! Ok back to Constellation.....have to go back to where I was to read on....be forwarned...may have to come back and tell ya how much I want to stomp all over him I stopped where he sees Naruto's fake smile mask due to his and Neji's shower thing.....makes me cry each time I read it....pure torture Naruto is going through.
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From ANON - Irol on August 15, 2010
I have read both of the versions and they were amazing! I'm so glad that I read them both! Thank you for such wonderful stories!
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From ANON - moodysavage on July 13, 2010
I have to first say I read All In before Constellations. I loved the 1st half and then hated hated hated Sakura with a passion. I loathed Sakura. So I was ready to read the alternate story. At first I thought Neji was going to die by sacrificing himself for the men he loved. But as soon as Naruto accepted Neji when he was on the roof... I knew. I knew it would be Naruto that died. He is the hero afterall. And I cried off & on for hours while I read your story. I love everything Naruto was and everything we held important and sacrificed himself for. He always put those he loved first. This was a beautifully written story. It's like I know & care about this family and ache for their pain. This story actually affected me like Mercedes Lackey's Last Herald Mage series which I've read so many times I've lost count. And when I want to care for a story again... I know I'll be rereading this again and again. Thank you so much for all you put in to this. And I'm so glad for you own successes again your own cancer.
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From Synph on March 15, 2010
It took me hours to read this. Once I started, I just couldn't do anything else, I didn't want to do anything else. It isn't often that I get so involved in a story in the Naruto fandom that the world just slips by me as I read, but you've managed to do that with this amazing story.

I cried several times as I read and I kept having to wipe the tears off of my face before they dropped down to my keyboard. But they weren't always tears of sadness. I cried because this was amazing. I could find no fault with the masterpiece that you have written. Everything was amazingly written and nothing could have been taken away.

I'm very glad that I stumbled across your work. I've never been more in love with a story like this and I know that I'll keep coming back and rereading it for a while.

Thank you for sharing this story
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From ANON - midnight essence on March 13, 2010
You are beyond an amazing writer. I read both stories and I must say that the two decidedly different directions were wholly needed. I laughed and was angry with "All In" and I cried like a baby with the sunshine in "Constellations". I would really like to know how you came about with the decision to follow two paths after chapter 14? And as I read Constellations(after having read All In) I thought many times that I knew where we were heading but you keep me surprised and hanging on to my seat and actually not stopping sleep or anything before I finished this to the end.

I also want to thank you for opening yourself and experiences to the world in this artwork known as Constellations.
If you like chat or anything to appease my questions on your fics; my email is missbri88@hotmail.com
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From koorimesbabygurl on February 24, 2010
wow. i mean wow. i read this in a day and im stunned, it is such a heartfelt and moving story that i completely forgot they were anime characters and were true people struggling with something that we all face. i am glad to have read this and happy that you posted it. very moving and even though a part of me died when naruto went i knew there was hope for the family even if it seemed well hopeless. thank you again for this story.

:D
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From kinai26 on February 21, 2010
thank you so much for writing both Constallations and All In One - I know both stories must have meant much to you, I could feel the pain, suffering...and the hope and love. I�m glad that you are alright and wish you all good in life from now on - thank you.
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From ANON - Chanii on February 18, 2010
I simply adore you....Completely and utterly adore you.
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