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Reviews for Lilith's heir

By : Necros2303
  • From DragonMan220 on September 27, 2009
    I am a bit upset with Haku being dead, couldn't Naruto have broken her over time to be his loyal plaything? Or made Zabuza discard her and taken her in a moment of vulnerability?

    But the scene with Tsunami was all I dreamed of and more, very nice. I suggest Naruto go on vacation to Wave a few times in the future.
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  • From DragonMan220 on September 23, 2009
    Very awesome chapter, especially the tentacle monster with Kurenai. I like the idea of Tenten as Naruto's queen, but I can totally see Hinata being her favorite maid since Hinata didn't need much to fall into her role as a slave.
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  • From VFSNAKE on September 22, 2009
    Nice! Now what about the other girls and women in the Elemental Countries. He could have Shizune and reverse Tsunade's age to take her too. Write more ASAP!
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  • From Aaronleach45123 on September 22, 2009
    Awesome chapter can't wait for the next one.
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  • From firelordeg on September 22, 2009
    wow this story is fantastic thank you for sharing please update again a.s.a.l.a. = as soon as life allows
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  • From DragonMan220 on September 18, 2009
    I think Lilith should visit her heir and get to know his girls better. I can't wait to see what happens next, but I suggest that Team Anko goes to Wave so Naruto can get a Female Haku and Tsunami! Plus, if Gato has some girls locked up I can see Naruto freeing them and getting a bunch of sexy maids out of the deal!
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  • From VFSNAKE on September 17, 2009
    Good chapter. However, it concerns me that you had Kurenai use a Genjutsu where Naruto felt like he was being treated like that, but I do like the poetic justice behind it, and that Kurenai gets what she deserves. Write more ASAP!
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  • From Aaronleach45123 on September 17, 2009
    Awesome chapter update soon
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  • From nocontact on September 14, 2009
    Very nice, good length, detailed, and well written. Not to mention I just love a submissive Hinata.

    ..::(-)::..
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  • From on September 14, 2009
    A good story, but I really didn't like the whole 'bash on Sasuke, bash on Sakura' thing in this story..... just seems like Naruto being a jackass for no other reason BUT to be a jackass.
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  • From DragonMan220 on September 14, 2009
    Nice chapter, very nice catching and taming of Ino. I can't wait to see what else Naruto gets up to in Konoha. Could Anko bring him some older kunoichi to add to his harem?
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  • From VFSNAKE on September 13, 2009
    Sweet! Naruto has got some hot women at his side giving him countless pleasure. I LOVE IT!
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  • From Aaronleach45123 on September 13, 2009
    Awesome chapter update soon.
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  • From nm1716 on September 13, 2009
    I love it. Wish for the hpdate to be a little longer. Can't wait to see what happens next. PLEASE UPDATE AGAIN SOON!!!
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  • From KaelHyun on September 13, 2009
    You better let Sakura be apart of the God damn Harem
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