Click Here!

Reviews for Lilith's heir

By : Necros2303
  • From Trandoshan on June 08, 2010
    I really like this story, and I hope you'll update it soon. Though I'm a bit sad. Did Hinata really had to be enslaved? It's just like Tenten said, she would do anything for her Naruto-kun. Wouldn't it be possible for him to give her back her own will later? I know it wouldn't probably change anything, because she would still stay with him, it just feels better :). Never mind, looking forward for more of your story.
    Report Review

  • From kyuubiragnrock on March 09, 2010
    good story hope to read more chapters soon
    Report Review

  • From MDK95 on March 08, 2010
    Hi great story so far and i cant wate for more updates hope thy come soon and realy like your work very good.
    Report Review

  • From pathagen on February 28, 2010
    kinky and fetishy and bloody good
    Report Review

  • From Chang on November 02, 2009
    I know that this is supposed to be a place where you can explore your fantasies and whatnot, so I won't say anything about that. But at the very least, improve your writing. You've got run-on sentences everywhere, and your quality of work is sloppy in general.
    Report Review

  • From bookmaster4321 on October 14, 2009
    I love where this story is going please update soon.
    Report Review

  • From nocontact on October 12, 2009
    You've put way too many idea's into my head.

    I want to see the twins. Now. Get writing!

    ..::(-)::..
    Report Review

  • From Aaronleach45123 on October 07, 2009
    Awesome chapter can't wait for the next one update soon.
    Report Review

  • From DragonMan220 on October 07, 2009
    Kitten is adorable. I can just see her enjoying some milk from the other girls!
    Report Review

  • From VFSNAKE on October 06, 2009
    NICE! HE GOT YUGITO! Now he needs Temari, Hana, Kin, Tayuya, Karin, and anyone else he comes across. Have Gaara kill Sasuke.
    Report Review

  • From nocontact on October 04, 2009
    Poor Haku... What did she ever do to you?

    ...Ah well, lets see some Temari already!

    ..::(-)::..
    Report Review

  • From firelordeg on September 27, 2009
    fantastic a bit sad that you dint have haku be another virgen and slave girl but thats ok thanks for sharing please update again a.s.a.l.a.
    Report Review

  • From Aaronleach45123 on September 27, 2009
    Awesome chapter.
    Report Review

  • From on September 27, 2009
    Not a good chapter, this latest one. You didn't have to make it bloodline stealing, you could make it permanent bloodline COPYING and therefore have spared Haku's life.
    Report Review

  • From VFSNAKE on September 27, 2009
    Shame Haku died. She could have been a loyal slave to him if things were manipulated in the right manner. Write more ASAP! What about Hana? Or Tsume?
    Report Review

T.O.S. | Content Guidelines | DMCA Info | F.A.Q. | Facebook | Tumblr | Abuse | Support | Contact | Donate

Click Here!