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Reviews for Naruto: Harem Shadow

By : DFoarile
  • From MastaK on December 01, 2019

    I thought that this story was the best but then you made it so other guys got in the action, that makes this story pure shit why would you ever do that? Now it's not even worth reading, should've kept it to just Naruto fucking and claiming girls all across the multiverse, btw why is there barely any titfucking? There was like maybe one or two mentions but then nothing, if I was him I would want constant titfucks, and another thing why force every girl to have massive tits? Don't get me wrong tits are awesome but having small tits are just as good as big ones. They can still do titfucks but then it would be most likely called a naizuri especially if it was a flat chest, variety never hurts


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  • From Stres on April 22, 2018

    I dont usualy leave reviews . Hm started good but after 2 ch the only thing i can say  is boring as fk , i know it sounds bad , but i liked your idea a lot sadly there is no diference ( all girls do the same thing in lemon , the only diference in the entire thing is the names , nothing beside that to get you hooked) also the way you write makes it a lil bad to read ( sakura says .hinata says . Tenten says each time gets realy annoying ) i might be a lil mean cause i realy liked the idea hope you can get this as advice and not the wrong way.


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  • From ANON - littlekit on September 26, 2016

    its been so long and i hope this fic is not abandoned.

    hope to hear from you again soon.


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  • From ANON - Reaper4991 on October 07, 2015
    I haven't read all of it yet, but I hope you have sakura's mom be a pleasure slave as she shouldn't get to be a wife and a lot of people would love to see Naruto dominate her
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  • From ANON - jakes on October 11, 2014
    can all the girls of naruto be his even better a few gender benders like itachi konan as his slave omoi basically everyone?
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  • From naruto on August 18, 2014
    This is a really cool story
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  • From Teeraal on February 28, 2013
    nice story. its rare to see a story where naruto gets a huge harem and other guys get even 1 girl so its cool how you are getting several guys large harems.

    may i suggest having them get to the monster girl quest world? though i think that if they do though that they shouldnt really bring many back but they have sex with several diffrent types with some of them being immune to the mind control and body altering just due something strange in their biology or something? girls i would recommend them taking back would be alice for naruto(maybe illias as well) and the 4 monster girl guards for the other guys?(mainly taking just these girls since most other monstergirls dont have actual names)

    obviously you dont have to but it would be something intresting and diffrent you could do with the story.
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  • From ANON - Anon on January 22, 2013
    This is a brilliant story. Please update soon
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  • From Mandalore on December 27, 2010
    awesome hope u continue it
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  • From Mandalore on December 15, 2010
    great story keep it up
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  • From bloodshound on August 23, 2010
    i would have thought having body variation among his women would be more interesting for a master... out fit variation as well. How do they manage having humongous knockers when they need to fight? don't they bounce and get in the way... and cause back problems?
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  • From DarthValgaav on May 05, 2010
    no
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  • From matthewbartosh on March 28, 2010
    When is the next chapter coming!
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  • From dan79 on January 19, 2010
    The last paragraph has an interesting contrast the shy and loyal hinata with the chaotic mask from the mask movies.
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  • From dan79 on January 19, 2010
    To me what makes it a good story is that the most important part of Naruto is maintained his compassionate nature.
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