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Reviews for Sakura Apologizes

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From naruto86 on May 11, 2010
DAMN nice update I loved it!!!!!!!!!!
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From mcgradypowers on May 11, 2010
Awesome chapter dude! Keep up the awesome work.

Suggested pairing of Kurenai, Tsume, or Shizune.

Once again, nice chapter. Look forward to future work.
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From ANON - cmcwiki on February 22, 2010
hmm this is good shit, is this similar to establishing dominance? post this on FF.net too
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From dan79 on February 21, 2010
Well at least naruto is a caring master to his slaves
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From ninjaman87 on February 13, 2010
you�re doing a great job with this fic along the rest of them, really liked how ino was enslaved in this one a sort of reversed hypnosis using her own weapon at her.
speaking of weapons any chance to make tenten and temari in one chapter both are good to be in a single chapter, and since they both use weapons using against them like bondage for tenten and a spanking treatment for temari with her iron fan shall be enslavement to behold.
if youre going to add tatuya(please :3 )then she will give naruto a strong challenge since of her strong nature shell be pretty difficult for naruto to enslave her and make her part of the harem, also about the contest it would be an amazing yet perverted to have it as an ending since naruto will have more girls to compete at the contest.
Thank you for updating and hope to see more perverted fics; and one more thing do you take challenges or request because i have a lot of ideas and i�ve been looking for some one to help me with if you can please contact me thank you.
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From kongxing on February 10, 2010
'bang up blowjob' is what did it, couldn't read it from there, it was fun until then, but that... it's like... it made me shudder, stay away from writing like that dude, you ruin the mood of the eroge
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From DragonMan220 on February 10, 2010
Very nice. Though I would like to see all three of Naruto's current slaves breaking in the next girl together to get her ready for him. I can't wait to see who is next.
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From ninjaman87 on January 22, 2010
great fic it is incredible how you manage to make naruto take the alpha male status, i was i little surprised that this story is going to have more chapters, considering �Turn about is fair play� was a oneshot begging with sakura was a really great start for this new fic, in some of youre other fics you have her killed but in this one she becomes an obedient sex slave wich is a good twist. this fic has become why favorite on this site, it has room for a lot potential and tits a great chance to add some characters like tsunade, terumi mei(mizukage, kurenai these are a few among the some that are favorites.

here are some ideas to help you with this fic so here they go;

1-after naruto gets more girls it s going to be important to find a bigger place for him to be with his harem of sex slaves, try having a secret house in konoha for him and his harem to live in secret without no one sucpect a thing.

in the secret house there could be two rooms a dungeon and a pleasure room:
the dungeon can be used for punishing slaves that dont follow the rules due that they arent fully tamed and for those that forget about following his commands, here you can have many devices for sexual torture (you�ll have to do some research for this but i recommend in order to discover many items for this)also when punishing you can have the girls battle for naruto�s forgiveness in some sport match but with a sexual touch for example:

rope pull: you can have two girls do a simple rope pull game but have the rope being tied up around the girls in a sensual bondage way, the winner earns a second chance of naruto�s forgiveness while the loser has her punishment doubled and be at the mercy of the winner.

wooden horse race: you can use two wooden horses with each girl atop, the objective woul be lasting the longest without cumming, while they are being move there can be dildos in their pussy and ass simulating for pleasure until theres a winner and a loser.

wooden horse balance: here two can be in one wooden horse, the goal can be having one of the slave making the object gain more weight from her side until a dildo is fully entered inside the other girl until she comes.

balance race: in this one both girls will have a bamboo pole tied at their arms with buckets around the edges, the goal is to fill them with water and take them to a barrel to be filled at a certain time limit, to make this more challenged they would have vibrators inside their both holes and their tits stuck with tape, having a belt strapped at their ankles for limited movement,crossing a thin board suspended3 feet up, a floor filled with colored square where they need to memorize the correct path or they get a small shock that would make the lose balance till they fall, and lastly having the barrels have a small hole for the water to leak in order for the girls to hurry.

2-harem queen: one of the slaves can become a second in command in the harem when naruto in away from a mission, in here i can only think of two candidates:

sakura: the reason for her is because she has already be claimed and has bend to his will, she showed regret her harsh treatment to him, also her strength and medical knowledge gives her an aura of authority while being submissive as well.

hinata: after being tamed by naruto and confess her love for him she will be able to do any command from him, her love and admiration for him can help her earn a level of authority whit in the harem and after this she would be good at giving and receiving orders as well.

as for the other girls some of them could take a little longer for naruto to tame them because of their strong personalities: anko, temari,tenten,tayuya,kurenai,tsume and mei for example are strong and depending which one is being tamed by naruto it could take like 2 chapters for some girls.
hana,kin,ayame,shizune are girls that can be easy on how there being taken, as some of the have a kind heart and being not rough like the others are better of being submissive.

3-make chapters having more than one girl and using their secret fantasies against them:
it would be better for the progression of the story to have naruto enslave 2 or tree girls in some chapters it could be a good for having certain girls as some sort of team up;
temari and tenten: these two are perfect to be in a double chapter of sorts, their personalities are kind of the same are tough yet sweet women as well and can be a help for some fetishes to try, as said before they might be harder to enslave due to their strong will but even the strongest kunoichi are women and they have needs as well, for starters you can use temari�s fan as a spanking tablet on both with having them being put in stocks(wooden restrains)to hold them still, and to end it have a little gangbang with kagebushin fucke the soon to be slaves as hard and raw as possible while still wearing the stocks giving it a medieval sexual torture.

for anko and kurenai; you can be useful with the jutsus these women use a strong illusion to hold them both while giving a sexual aura to lower their defenses and from anko her snakes can become tentacles, but in their minds they are trapped in an illusion and having naruto screwing them both as well. as well he could take pictures for some fond memories and could a good blackmail material in case their will is to strong.

4-villian:
having a villian in a story like this can give the story a certain type of suspense , naruto can also be protecting his harem against some who has a far more sinister objective for the women and by enslaving them he somehow protects them until he destroys certain evil.

5- explore certain sexual desires:in order to spice you're lemons you would need to add certain ways of sexual act of fetish:
for ayame since she is a cook she could find ways to mix sex with food in a way turning a certain slave into a living plate of food, by having prepared dishes atop of certain slave this could also be a mean for naruto to reward her.

anko can be more wicked due to her nature she can possibly enjoybe dominated an be taken hard for her liking, but the snake tentacles from earlier would be a good idea by having them act as restrains while she is been ravaged.
hana and tsume can be overpowered due to naruto being a supreme alpha male they can be overtaken by their lust for dominance from the blond, but in order to show their position they can have dog collars around their neck with the tag that would say �property of naruto namikaze� and having a spiral on the other side.
certain acts can help, footjob can be used by kurenai and her art of illusion can make herself as a stimulant for sex.

those are my ideas so i hope they help.

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From nocontact on January 13, 2010
I tend to like a little more romance between these two, but nonetheless, damn sexy!
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From ANON - charismaticenigma on December 12, 2009
this is a kick ass astory and i REALLY hope you keep it going i can't wait to see who else you bring in. I'd like to request Kurani for the next chapter if i can
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From wind797 on December 02, 2009
very good i hope ino comes up next, you could really play some mind games there
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From RichardH on December 01, 2009
...I have very mixed feeling about this... I loved the first chapter sort of due to sakura's guilt and wanting to be naruto's. and I do love Naruto making sweet love to hinata... but making him get a harem is kinda a shitty plot. please stick to the story you were writing before this second chapter
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From naruto86 on December 01, 2009
You are an artist that's all I can say
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From ANON - NARUTO LOVER on December 01, 2009
super, keep up the great work.
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From nocontact on October 04, 2009
Well, despite Sakura defintily being rather low on my Favorties list, it's a farily intresting concept. More importantly, it's very well done.

Hope to see more, and a little Sakura/Hinata competition would be pretty interesting to see.

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