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Reviews for Midnight Memories

By : Daydreamer79

From ICrawlThroughYourWindow on August 04, 2010
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Naruto wont have his memories?!?! Oh the woe in my heart right now!

How dare you make me tear up! You! You! amazing person you! My heart broke when Itachi found Naruto's body, and when Sasuke felt Naruto leave the world. Ugh! I could barely take reading it! I had to repeatedly slam the draw my phone was in shut after reading a few sentences just to calm myself down and NOT cry at work!

Poor Nagato! That poor baby getting rejected every time he was reborn ;_; *shakes head* He needs some sort of happiness after all that he has been through :( *pets him* I'm putting my heart in your hands, I'll be happy with whatever direction you take him in.

You're breaking my heart, lady, I dont know if I can take much more of this heart wrenching pain. It's like you're trying to drive me batty with all the emotional rollercoasters you're sending me on! *shakes head again while fanning self* But no complaints here. Mmmm, I love having my heart ripped out and stomped on then taped back in with a kiss. I'm sure you wont leave us emotionally unsatisfied.

I was extremely happy when I saw the update! I was at work, of course, and I giggled like a school girl when I saw this in the recent updates! I can't review from my phone so I had to wait till I got home and wouldn't you know it a storm rolled through and knocked my damn power out AS I WAS WRITING THE FIRST REVIEW! Mind you, it was much longer then this one and detailed with how much I loved this chapter...so I'm heart broken I lost it. Oh well, spilled milk and all that.

You made my day with that shout out, haha, most of the time people ignore my insane ramblings but I'm happy to know that now YOU know why random cashiers are rude to you XD Honest, we dont mean it we just wanta get back to your stories ;)

Thank you so very much for the update *stranger hug* I look forward to the next chapter!
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From ANON - Anon on August 03, 2010
every time i think ive gotten over my obsession with your writting you just keep sucking me back in! haha not that i dont enjoy it. i love your work especially midnight memories cant wait for more!!!
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From ANON - Anon on August 02, 2010
AH! You're breaking my heart on several levels. Guess all I can do is keep hope alive for them to come through the continuing hard times. Can't wait to see what you come up with next.
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From AnimeAngelSisters on August 02, 2010
This story just keeps getting better and better. Each chapter is more intense than the last. And so much drama too, but not like some soap opera. It's way better! Can't wait for more!
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From ANON - qwerty on August 02, 2010
I love this story so much! Pein and Itachi??! Oh man, cannot wait to see what happens next!
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From ANON - dar on August 02, 2010
Yes, I definitely agree, I am confused but it is worth it if there will be more!! I love where this story is going and love what you've done. Thank you so much for this chapter!!!
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From ICrawlThroughYourWindow on July 21, 2010
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Holy crap! I've been reading this story all weekend on my phone while at work! I had to hide it in a drawer and I started getting pissy when customers approached me XD I was afraid I would get fired because I was so addicted to this story I stopped trying to hide the fact that I was reading it after a while and I got ruder and ruder to people when they came up to me during a good part! XD

I thought this was finished! I normally only read stories that are finished so I avoid being let down by another unfinished story, imagine my horror when I find out it is NOT finished! Usually I lose interest in a story after 7 chapters, at most, but you! *shakes fist* just had to keep me completely and utterly brain-dead to the rest of the world! Keeping my mind completely focused in on this story! Its like I was living in this damn world. xD

I've always resisted the whole 'vampire thing' because its usually the same thing over and over again, but again you!! are an excellent fishermen. You've got me 'hook, line, and sinker' hahah. I actually started reading this with the idea of stopping mid-chapter and being like "They are all the same! Haha! No one can write a good vampire story!" but YOU!!!! *sighs and shakes head*

Oh, I feel sorry for you! I hate when people go all crazy on the author about what sort of direction the story is going in. Especially couple-wise. If the author feels like the story needs to be another couple and it works out that way I dont bitch, things go the way they are supposed to go and if the author wants it go a certain way its THEIR story! Sorry people tried to bombard you like that, but I'm so happy to hear you are an author of the heart and not an author of the people :)

What can I say about this story to express how much I enjoy it, I have no clue. Its not a shallow story that touches on brief emotional explainations and it doesn't bipass major issues that are normally ignored in stories. So far its completely satisfying, other than the whole 'unfinished' part ;)

I can't thank you enough for this story, and I very much look forward to an update. I dont rush perfection so take your time, I just hope you dont loose interest. But it doesn't seem like you are that type, so I'm not too freightened.

Peace and well wishes on you and your writings :]
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From ANON - animvelover on July 16, 2010
this fic is so freaking AWESOME!!! i missed some updates so had to play catch up. well done, and the suspense behind pein is killing me!
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From ANON - Andi-chan on July 16, 2010
LMAO. I totally love you. That line was pure genius. 'Arousal is common in this type of feeding'... 'You mean you...?' 'NO!'
Oh man. Priceless.
So I'm not totally clear on why Pein is so hostile towards Itachi... Do they have some sort of past that Itachi can't seem to remember? Or is it because they, whatever Pein and Naruto are, are the natural enemies of nightwalkers?
I like that you're slowly revealing small clues as to what Naruto and Sasuke's destiny will be. They have one more test to endure, so I guess that means Naruto will die once more.
Danzou is such a sleaze-ball... I hope Shika gets to show him the powers of the Nara clan. Hahaha.
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From ANON - NiChee on July 13, 2010
ok now i'm really curious about the whole pein issue. "what" is naruto? in the end, i really hope both naruto and sasuke will be together. after all they've been through, i think they deserve it. this fic is awesome. i love it so much! thanks for updating!
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From meowkuu2 on July 12, 2010
more!!!! i need more!!!!
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From ANON - Anon on July 12, 2010
Finally, another enticing chapter! I've waited in fervent anticipation of each chapter and am more than happy that the story has gotten to the point where we have quite a bit of background information and are now moving steadily forward in the current time. Though, you sure do a fabulous job of keeping us yearning for more knowledge, be it past or present, and introducing whole new aspects for us to ponder over. Oh, I must say that I couldn't help but laugh at Sasuke & Itachi's combined emphatic reaction when Naruto was about to question if they felt arousal with one another while Sasuke was feeding from Itachi. Even after all their centuries of life, they still can be easily rattled. Too funny.
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From SoSickOfNyQuil on July 12, 2010
This story is absolutely amazing! The history that you go into is real in depth and detailed, each chapter i feel like I'm continuously learning something new it's amazing. And the bond between Naruto and Sasuke is something that amazingly transcends the norm, it's crazy. I feel so sad for Sasuke, to lose the one he loves over and over again, to want to prevent that inevitable from happening and yet knowing that you can't. And that old lady, I don't understand the whole 'needing to prove himself 10 times' I mean it's driven Sasuke to the point where he's lost his mind and his grip on sanity. He's so afraid and broken it's heartbreaking to watch. And I just knew Naruto had to be something other than human. There's no way someone can come back like that, he's like a cat!

Can I just comment on the fact that I really, REALLY DISLIKE DANZO!! *sigh* I just wanted to make that clear.

I wish that Sasuke and Naruto can find a happy ending, not a fairy tale one but a happy one, where they are together. However that's entirely in your hands... I also can't help but feel compassion for Itachi, not only for living up to his promise but how much he cares for his little brother and in that love for him he was able to take Naruto in and understand what it was that Naruto means to Sasuke, although now he's fallen for Naruto himself...

It's all very complex and I take my hat off to your for doing it... I just have this foreboding feeling about the ending =(((
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From ANON - qwerty on July 12, 2010
Oh Shika! Ever the sensible one. I can't wait to see what Pein has up his sleeve with regards to Naruto. Seems like Sasuke is more sane after drinking both Itachi and Naruto's blood. Hopefully a little more rest and he'll be able to withstand the council's trial.
Love this story so much! Keep going!
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From ANON - Talltree-san on July 12, 2010
Sacred number? The mystery deepens even further. I can't wait till the answer is revealed >_
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