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Reviews for Midnight Memories

By : Daydreamer79

From ANON - darkamorpheous on September 04, 2010
Ooh I am absolutely loving this story, I can't wait to see Danzou get his comeuppance. Speaking of which someone should wake Itachi's father up as well, he deserves an ass whipping himself for the torment his sons have had to endure due to his selfishness, their mother deserves a tongue lashing too, you can't tell me she's that ignorant, or if she is ignorant of the whole thing she deserves an even greater tongue lashing since she was the one who wanted to go to sleep and didn't really give much consideration to her sons, what kind of mother is that. Gah, sorry for the ranting just had to get that out, it would be funny though to see them both get the most indignant wake up call and then receive a major tongue lashing from their sons. I love your characterisations though and the way things keep us guessing. Neji as a Watcher was a great call and it was nice to finally discover what happened with Pein and Itachi. I was mad at Konan for her small part but you can't help but like her either, sure it was a bit selfish of her but she wanted a happy ending too, she's a great character. I love Naruto and Sasuke's interactions even though Sasuke went rather insane for a while lol, they are just too cute and Itachi's devotion to his brother and attachment to Naruto because he lost his own bond mate without even knowing it is also sweet, forever the protective older brother. Love it, love it, please continue I can't wait for the next instalment.
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From ANON - qwerty on August 31, 2010
Oh noes! That's so sad! At least it wasn't Itachi's fault. Cannot wait to see what's coming to Danzo.
Great chapter!!
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From ANON - Anon on August 30, 2010
Oh boy. The reckoning cometh. Danzou has a lot to answer for.

Its interesting, because if I am remembering correctly, Naru & Sasu met their first time in a similar way that Tachi and Nagato met their second time.

Will Pain share this newfound knowledge with Tachi? He should be made aware of the transgressions his father and Danzou committed against the two of them.

Can't wait to see what happens next.
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From smint45 on August 30, 2010
This chappie was great!!! So Itachi didn't betray Nagato!!! Thats so fantaastic!!! Perhaps now they can have a start over!!! Oh I so hope that Danzo will pay!!!
And the pic is great too!!!!
See you again soon!!!!!

P.S. I love this story sooo much!!!! I'm always doing a happy dance when you update!!!!
And each chappie is not the way I expect it too be!!! I love unpredictable storys!!!!
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From ANON - Talltree-san on August 30, 2010
Oh okay, now we know the relationship between Itachi and Pein. Thank you, now we got a background check :).
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From lovel3ssangel on August 26, 2010
Hell yes! this is phenomenal. the writing style, and amount of work you put into this is just wonderful. Absolutely loved.
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From ANON - Talltree-san on August 22, 2010
Man, this story is getting really deep. And I'm loving every minute of it, this is the best Sasunaru I'm reading yet!!
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From smint45 on August 22, 2010
That was so fantastic!!!! I'm so happy they are together finally and that Sasuke is remotly sane!!! I really start to like pain!!! i can't wait for him and Itachi to come together!!! Itachi really needs one to relive him form his Sasuke obsession ^^ I thank you so much for the fast update!!! I absoloutly love this story!!!! Thank you soo much and see you again soon!!!!
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From ANON - Anon on August 21, 2010
Oh and...

HAPPY BIRTHDAY!!!

Leos Rule!
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From ANON - Anon on August 21, 2010
Thank you for the quick update. Love it, love it, love it. The finger to Danzou. Love it.

Are the Watchers a bit like the elementals in The Chronicles of Riddick? They seem able to foresee things and have an airy quality about them.

I was upset with Konan not wanting to even give Naruto a chance, but at least she realized that she was wrong after Pein's insistence and departure.

Neji totally fits as a Watcher since he is Mr. Fate himself. Who is his bond mate I wonder?

Pein's decision to help Naruto - Is this because he has an attachment to Naruto from watching over him, or is it because he realizes that if Naruto dies, then Sasuke dies, which would severely impact Itachi, his own bond mate, in most negative ways up to his own possible death. Could it be for both reasons?

Naruto's last life's friends - Do they know he is dead?

Naruto's body - What will happen? Will they have a funeral?

Does Naruto remember all of his past lives now that he is a Watcher and no longer quite human?

Naruto's uniqueness as a soul/Watcher - If he does not pull his power from the earth, but Sasuke, does that mean he is weaker than the other Watchers? Assuming he will need to be trained, will they have to figure out a different way to do so? Surely Naru/Sasu will not want to be separated during through this period. Also, it is "almost unheard of" the way he kept the same form throughout all his lives... I am interested to see the true significance of this as the story moves along.

Sasuke's understanding of Naruto without him speaking - Will Naruto be able to do the same with Sasuke?

Pein's allusion to Sasuke's strength - Sasuke will be harder to kill now that he and Naruto are more permanent (or do they need to do something further to become truly permanent?)... I can't wait to see just how strong he (and Naruto) will be and how that differs from his normal strength.

Itachi feeling empty - Why did he push away Nagato's bond with him? All of the instances of them previously meeting that Pein speaks of... Does Itachi not remember them because he pushed them away with the bond? It seems odd that Itachi doesn't remember anything though? Could someone have messed with his head and feelings so he would not bond with Nagato?

Poor Pein. Maybe Itachi will now be more open to him/her after witnessing the developments between Sasu/Naru and gaining an understanding of what has really been grind on. Somehow, I don't think Pein will make it easy on Itachi.

Sasuke's fast thinking - I like how rational he seemed to come up a plausible reason for him being locked away by Itachi. Even when he is not well, he still carries a sharp mind. Can't wait to see him retaliate once he is well (or better than before wit Naruto by his side) for Danzou's attempt on the lives of himself and those he loves, as surely Danzou set up Naruto's last death hoping to also take Sasuke down, thereby weakening Itachi enough to take out as well. Oh, also like Naruto's input to explain Sasuke's bout of craziness.

Naruto's recognition of Itachi's love for him - Sasuke is not just paranoid. It�s good that Itachi had a chance to love Naruto in this last life instead of continuing to despising him for putting Sasuke through hell as well as himself by proxy for so long. He will be much more accepting now that Naru/Sasu are more permanently together. Was Naruto aware of this love while living his last life, or did he only recognize it after gaining all the knowledge and wisdom of his previous lives? Or, could it be that he could sense it from Sasuke, since Sasuke already felt it?

I absolutely love this story. Please update soon.

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From loveusender on August 21, 2010
First of all, I was blown away by how deep this chapter really is. I didnt understand the chp 14 so had to go back and reread 13 to get a grasp of what was happening again. So...Naruto is a watcher now? and what will happen with danzo. I get the sick gut feeling that he's not stopping until he gets his way..
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From SoSickOfNyQuil on August 20, 2010
Aww poor Pein, =(.That has to hurt, he remembers each time and because he looked different each time, Itachi didn't remember him....
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From bunnylove on August 15, 2010
This story just keeps getting better and better!! I'm so addicted.
You revealed so much in the last chapter, my head is still trying to catch up. xD
I'm still unsure as to what happened with Naruto. Did his bond to Sasuke break when Pein extracted his soul? Or...? Yeah. I might need to go back and re-read the chapter. Hahaha.
I'm anxiously awaiting the next exciting installment.
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From smint45 on August 13, 2010
Absoloutly totally fantastic story!!! I can't tell you how much I love it!!!! But Please tell me there will be a happy end!!!! I can't stand it if naruto and Sasuke as well as Pain and Itachi can't be together!!! It would just be too crul after living through 10 lifetimes!!!! Please I'm beggin you to given them peace in the end!!! Till them let them suffer *says the sadistic bitch inside of me* ;) Well Anyway I think I have to pronounce that this is by far the best story I've ever read!!! This is the biggest compliment I can give this story!!! Since I've read about 400 fanfics it is really difficult to find good ones like all your storys ^^ Please update soon!!! I can't wait for more!!!
P.S. Could you mail me when you update?? My mail is kuraitenschi@web.de !! Thanks!!
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From meowkuu2 on August 09, 2010
OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!!! this is...I'm...damn!!! please write more!! please tell me naruto and sasuke will be together!! please!!!!
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