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Reviews for Midnight Memories

By : Daydreamer79
  • From ANON - Anon on January 23, 2012
    (The rats had barely eased the hunger that beat inside him. Traveling nearly nonstop had burned up most of his reserve energy. There would be no more feeding on animals. He would require human when dusk approached.)

    why the drama of having him feed on rats the whole trip- you've written that they can choose not to be seen by humans- that they have super-vamp speed; that they can make their blood donors forget being fed on and even give them a new memory_ so there's absolutely no reason why he should have to eat only rats. doesn't make sense.

    and an old hag just comes out of nowhere and curses sasuke for no reason?? i imagine you will go into further detail in later chapters- otherwise it's a weak/cheap plot device.

    the story has interested me very much- i like the concept very much. but there's contradictions (the feeding on rats when it's not necessary. the difference in travel times from 1 week for the vamps to cross the ocean to many weeks for naruto's family. the origin of the curse- if it is a curse) it's like a present wrapped very expensively and inside the box is kinda a disappointment- i can only hope these kinds of things are fleshed out in future chapters- it is a lengthy story so that is likely- if that's the case- then just take this as a very interested reader just pointing out details noticed- so that you know this reader is actually paying attention to what you're writing- instead of leaving a review that just says- 'great job, update soon'
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  • From ANON - Anon on January 23, 2012
    a very fascinating beginning. only thing i found that didn't make much sense was:

    (but if we have them travel in the spring and summer, they should reach the fortress before the autumn chill.” )

    -so you had sasuke say it would take more than a season for naruto and his family to travel there.
    -but then you had itachi say:

    (If we leave, we should make it home in a week’s time)

    i liked the beginning with sasuke and baby naruto- sasuke pledging to always find/love/protect/etc naruto.
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  • From TheMadKatter13 on June 18, 2011
    I very rarely find a story so enticing that I must read it more than once. In fact, right now, there are only 2 stories I have found that I must read every 1-2 months, and Midnight Memories has now been added to that short list. I am a little sad that there wasn't as much sex, but the storyline was so amazing, fascinating, solid, I hardly mind. Thank you for writing one of THOSE stories, and sharing it so that I could read it.
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  • From DewiSri on May 29, 2011
    I would write this to you in an email rather than a review, because seriously, my commentary does not just pertain this particular story. I've read through 99% of your stories so far and i've been able to conclude a couple of things. First of all. You are Awesome. Yes. YOU. You're an amazing writer and your stories are proof of that. Reading Weight of the Heart had me depressed for DAYS of how awesome it was. Im shitty with remembering titles but so far i havent read a single line of your work and thought i was getting bored. Since i have no idea what would raise your ego, i can only say that Im craving more from you the same way a coke addict craves coke from her dealer. Yes, it is That bad.

    As I'm not quite sure what else to add im going to leave it at this.

    Just to summarize it.
    -You are Awesome.
    -Your stories are awesome.
    -And i want more.


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  • From HalfFallenAingyl on May 15, 2011
    *sighs happily* just finished. That was awesome! I'm so happy for all of them!
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  • From HalfFallenAingyl on May 15, 2011
    I only just finished chapter 7, but I HAD to review what I've read so far. This is...beautiful! It's an amazingly wonderful thing to find authors with the kind of talent you possess. It breaks my heart every time Sasuke loses Naruto, but the connection between the two... It defies description. I feel horrible for them both, and at the same time, I'm cheering the boys on.

    I have no idea how you managed to keep them IC in a AU story so different from the actual Naruto story, but you have, and it's amazing, and I already know I won't be able to go to bed until I've finished this story.
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  • From alexxgalaxy on April 08, 2011
    wow, there were so much angst through over first half of the story. My heart ached and felt so bad for Sasuke. I also felt sorry for Naruto that he always died at such young age and didn't get much chance to live a life. In the first few chapters, we had little chance to access his mind and read his feeling. The story was always going from Sasuke and Itachi's perspective. I was glad that it changed later on and we got to see things from Naruto's perspective.

    Despite the amount of angst, I considered it one of the best SasuNaru stories I've ever read. I like the idea of NightWalker and Watcher. I also love the care and strong connection between the brothers. Because of them, Naruto's death was not merely a curse to Sasuke but also Itachi. Another bonus point to this story was it's completed. It really sucked that many writers abondoned their stories and left the readers hanging.

    I have question about Sasuke/Naruto and Itachi/Pein feeding on each other though. When they gave the energy or blood to the others, wouldn't they get weaker physically every time they did it? How could they get stronger? Unless there was synergy when they joined as one?

    Again this story was awesome but I wish there would be more scenes of Sasuke and Naruto being together. After all, they were cruelly torn apart by fate half through the stories. Any chance that there will be an epilogue?
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  • From arianauchiha23451 on April 06, 2011
    That as well worth the wait.... i was glad to finally see itachi and pein together.... once again it was so awesome
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  • From LadyRonin on April 06, 2011
    That was just beautiful I really love that itachi x pein pairing and the way you ended midnight memories was truly great. I have enjoyed your story from beginning to end and hope to see some other story from you soon.
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  • From LadyWolf on April 06, 2011
    I'VE LOVE READING THIS FROM THE BEGINNING!!!! I'm so sad to see this end..I really do like the pairing of Itachi and Pein...I wish you would do a spin off or sequel or whatever so we can see more of this pairing!

    Good stuff!!!
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  • From smint45 on April 04, 2011
    Awe the end was so sweet!!! I totally loved this story!!!! Thanky ou so much for the happy end with pain and Itachi!!!! Really was a fantastic story!!! Hope to hear from you again!!!
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  • From ANON - qwerty on April 03, 2011
    yay! I'm so happy that they finally completed their bond! Though I did a mental ouch when Itachi sank his fangs into Pein's dick... but Pein clearly enjoyed it lol.
    Great story! Loved every bit of it!
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  • From KoibitoFemme on April 03, 2011
    Oh my goodness. I have been following this story since you first posted it. I felt like I was literally addicted to it. Thanks so much for sharing just a wonderful story. Kudos to you. This story alone has me snooping around whenever I see your name on a story. Keep it up please.
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  • From ANON - Talltree-san on February 23, 2011
    I'm sad to see this story coming to a close end, but it was awesome to read. I was wondering if you have a another story in mind to start after this one's over?
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  • From arianauchiha23451 on February 23, 2011
    that chapter was well worth the wait... now i cant wait to read the epilogue.... i really hope that itachi and pein can get back together... update as soon as you can
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