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Reviews for Deidara Grounded

By : seraserastuff
  • From suzannecmc on September 10, 2009
    "about 300 extra words in which the men took turns with Deidara - and this was a problem how?"
    hahahaha.

    I finally got to read both of the last two chapters, YAY!

    really so nice how you have the characters blend. lovely, lovely writing.
    and just keep up with the out-takes because they make me roll. XD

    chapter 7...wow.
    I love, Love, LOVE that you made Kakashi scared and bear witness to Deidara's turmoil.
    I haven't read anything quite like this.
    I had a feeling when you gave your explanations about your milder version of chapter 3
    that we would get flashbacks and yay we did!!! and you made him cry.

    "It's ok, I think it's just Hidan trying to braid weeds into your hair."
    -that was beautiful.

    why do I like reading this...because shut up!
    now go work, educate yourself, and write woman, write!
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  • From QuintiliVare on September 08, 2009
    Q-chan wants more! sorry about the lack of constructive comment. I'm no good at that kinda thing, but still wanted to show my appreciation!

    I LOVE YOU DEI-KUN!!!
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  • From suzannecmc on September 04, 2009
    your welcome for the review:)
    Deidara in girls clothes is a must by the way and no one is eviler than youuuuu!

    the story wouldn't move without action and politics! your story is quite original,
    thanks for that.

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  • From honZeldaFitz on August 31, 2009
    I am loving this story. I hadn't really thought about Kakashi and Deidara together, but I like it! Hidan is such a jerk, but you make him so funny. Can't wait to see where you go with this. :)
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  • From DaioSidhe on August 27, 2009
    Kakashi...Deidara is one pairing I have never thought of.
    I been liking Itachi Deidara after finding two very good flic
    with that pairing. Good fanfiction is hard to find.

    It's sooo cute! Poor confused Dei, blow up a city! Whee.
    Get all confusal and kiss and get rejected and he's all...Whaaaa? *Whineee* I'll kill youuu.


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  • From DaioSidhe on August 27, 2009
    Wonderful chapter, you managed to put such emotion in the sceen
    to really paint a picture with out getting to any nasty details.
    Deidara is a scared trying to be tough kid.
    Poor Lee. *Ruffles his hair* Even people you think you can trust
    that should be above such things because of job-cops, judges- etc
    can be terrible people.
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  • From DaioSidhe on August 27, 2009
    Me again, I tend to review flicks I really like by chapter.
    I love the omake sections. They are amusing, Deidara has enough
    teenager pride and balls to say he's from the Akasuki if dressed like a girl.
    Poor guy can't get a break can he.
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  • From DaioSidhe on August 27, 2009
    Deidara needs more spot light. *Pleased to have found this flick*
    It is wonderfully written and Deidara character is a lovely blend of
    upset wounded teenager and old dark I've seen everything in the world agelessness.

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  • From suzannecmc on August 24, 2009
    well I have wanted to read this for a while and so glad I did!
    I read the chapters over the last two days so I will try to get my thoughts in here coherently;)

    thanks for this funny, angry, and what I think is pretty true to character
    account of Deidara
    beautifully descriptive, I love how you manage Deidara's speech, wonderful!

    funny my thought was that Neji found him interesting too, in the beginning, but your right the chemistry you
    wove between Dei and Kakashi is just lush.

    and thank you so much for the "out-takes"
    "YOU!" screamed Kankuro. Deidara's heart stopped...was he recognized?"You...... do you...." Kankuro was blushing, "...wanna...go out with me?" - too much fun!!!
    as for chapter 3, have you ever thought of adding a "director's cut" along with the revised chapter 3? to give people choices reading about how dark a plot bunny ran through your twisted thoughts? kind of curious about that "totally worse ...so much worse" version O.o

    now you went ahead and made him human and vulnerable and he has FEELINGS! I'm sooo glad. you've taken a rather despicable boy and now we all want to heal him (well through Kakashi we do;D) I really look forward to the development of this story and wonderful writing.

    thank you:)

    "Hmm." Kakashi approximated, "I'd say exactly as many days as the author finds necessary." "Necessary for what, un?" Kakashi just smiled. ".......o_0" bwwaaaaaa hahahahahha !!! (wipes tear from eye -I really do love 'out-takes'.


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  • From cynaga on August 20, 2009
    This great. I love Deidara in this. Thx! :)
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  • From Nelleh on August 17, 2009
    Wow.... I think you did well, very well indeed. Good story, too. :)
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  • From xgangsofasiax on August 16, 2009
    Okay so that chapter made me tear up. I felt SOOOOOO bad for him! And I wouldn't call Deidara out of character at all, he's going through the emotions that ANYONE would be going through had the same thing happened to them, it's character development. I offically LOVE this story. Any story that can make me laugh, cry, and feel all angsty has my vote. *holds out Hello Panda* you've earned it!
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  • From missnomad on August 16, 2009
    This is actually one of the first stories with Deidara that I'm reading (always liked him, but he just didn't appeal in fictions to me before), and I'm slowly but surely getting hooked.

    I can't help but smile every other line at Deidara's thoughts, which seemingly won't stop flowing despite the severity of the situation he's in... well, at least until the middle of the last chapter, that is. By the way, I very much liked how much you did and didn't show of what was happening in the dungeon. And no, Deidara didn't seem too much ooc to me. I'm pretty much in accordance with Kakashi's assesment of the situation/Deidara's mental state, the latter being young still and possibly harbouring an inferiority complex.

    Speaking of the copy nin: It was the fascinating idea - and hope - of more and in-depth interaction between Kakashi and Deidara that kept me reading in the beginning, and lo and behold! you seem to be catering to my taste. :) Out of nowhere, Kakashi/Deidara has suddenly become a possible pairing for my reading habits (... only there aren't really any such stories, what a shame), although I kind of dislike talking of "pairings". It's just that I think the two personalities could make for some very interesting interaction of more than just one sort... But who am I kidding? Of course, Kakashi comforting a hurt Deidara is a very appealing picture in my mind, as is picturing the two more intimately... Yep, here's the stupid fangirl side of me making an appearance, which would also like to thank you for the "new" pairing, by the way. :)

    Can't wait for the next chapter!

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  • From xgangsofasiax on August 11, 2009
    Aww I feel kinda bad for Deidara, I know I shouldn't but I do. He'd be much better off in Konoha. And that thing at the end had me laughing like a mad woman! Freakin' hilarious! Can't wait to read more... this story is awesomeness.
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  • From xgangsofasiax on August 10, 2009
    I'm really liking this so far and can't wait to see where it goes!
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