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Reviews for Deidara Grounded

By : seraserastuff
  • From chibishirochan1 on February 20, 2012
    I love this chapter, but I wish you'd left in the parts you took out. I feel like it would have been better if you left it as it was.
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  • From chibishirochan1 on February 16, 2012
    This is such an amazing story, it's upsetting you never finished it. Deidara is such an uke, I can't stand it much longer *goes fangirl insane*
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  • From SecretNekoCAKE on January 29, 2010
    Hey I love the story, Normelly i dont really like Daidara in ff's... but this is REALLY good!!!

    Advice: I think you should put the old 'rape-scene' back in, because then the story would make so much more sence! because Daidara is traumatic affected by it and it is a important fact in the story, that dai is so fragile about it..:D

    Keep up the good work-I LOVE it :D:D:D:D:D:DD:D:D
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  • From TiEnyaSama on January 05, 2010
    Yay!! I read the first chapters when they came out...then my computer crashed. So I spent the last four hours catching up ^.^ I really like how you make Dei so confused, not really sure what he wants/needs. It fits post-trauma stress symptoms well. I fell bad for him, for what he's gone through and what he's dealing with. But I love the way you have Hidan interacting with him. Its adorable the way he rips on Dei!! More HidanDei is always appreciated ;) I can't wait to see the 'missing' fight scene. I don't think that was so out of place. The way you construct your story is your style, and it works for this fic. Can't wait to find out who has shown up and what the future holds for poor Deidara. (Does somebody love him in the end? If no...can I have him? *blushes*) ^.^ Keep up the great witting!
    -TiEnya
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  • From propaganda on November 23, 2009
    ... I just sat down and read through all of this. Oh man, I hope it isn't abandoned! I think you're pretty good at writing Deidara! He is my favourite, and also I have a pretty big thing for humiliation and comfort, so uh. This hits the spot. *cough*
    You are also pretty good at writing the Zombie Brothers, especially Kakuzu ... two close almost-favourites. I dig the PoV-switching between Dei and Kakashi - I think Kakashi's internal thoughts and reactions especially are also quite in-character.

    Huh, and Kakashi x Deidara - who'da thought?? This makes me want more of this pairing, it makes my inner fanboi happy
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  • From gingermaya on October 23, 2009
    Hey, I am in the process of reading your fic - I'm at the end of ch3 now. I wanted to tell you that I absolutely love it - you're doing great job with describing and building all the characters' personalities. You're doing an excellent job with Deidara, who has always seemed to be quite difficult to write, because his type of crazy is quite unusual. I love the way you sway him seamlessly between rage and almost naive petulance!
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  • From spoon10488 on October 22, 2009
    Cool story. I've only read the first chapter, but it's looking good so far. I'll read more later. Keep up the good work.
    =)
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  • From Travellyr on October 22, 2009
    Sera, work is noming my heeeaaad....

    Though this cheers me up. Deidara all affronted is so CUTE, and it's hilarious that he can tell the truth and NOBODY BELIEVES HIM. "Dei-chan, you really are something else. You'd let us believe you betrayed us so we wouldn't think you'd fallen for genjutsu?" Even Kakashi went "wut." XD

    Being depressed against the tree, failed!making out with Kakashi, was also pretty cute. I have the suspicion that under different circumstances he'd be annoyed instead of depressed... "I'm not allowed to move, I'm not allowed to touch, I'm not allowed to TALK, WHY THE HECK AM I DOING THIS THEN? MAYBE YOU CAN ENLIGHTEN ME."

    ^-^ Thanks!
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  • From ShikaChouFan4Life on October 20, 2009
    Aww man, you caught me! *tries to struggle against the hug* *is normally a lurker* I've been reading this story since the beginning, and I must say that I eagerly await each and every chapter. This is an amazingly well written story that makes me want to go from giggling to almost crying in some parts, and , to me at least, it isn't the least bit confusing.

    *sits back and eagerly awaits the next chapter* :D
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  • From Travellyr on October 20, 2009
    Nah... I mean, I was hopeful, but I was mostly teasing.

    ::laughs:: I like the pink pinata style! It all makes sense later, so it works, ne?

    More tomorrow from me, I think... I need sleeeeep. They make me work before noon! ;_;
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  • From QuintiliVare on October 19, 2009
    WOOOOOT! Thank you, Thank you, Thank you for the update! *glomps* and I must say, that omake at the end.... WAS EXACTLY WHAT I WAS THINKING!! rofl! Hum... and I do think tha Drama suits you better (not that the fight scenes wern't awesome too) and I CAN'T WAIT FOR IBIKI!!! heehee! He's one of my fav.'s! and I think, with is understanding of psychology, that his opinion of Dei-kun will be very interesting! Can't wait!
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  • From suzannecmc on October 03, 2009

    ahh busy life crap...it does get in one's way:)

    oh pretty, messed up Deidara...just have him going in circles emotionally.

    these were all good exchanges to advance the story, me likee!
    and as much as I think Sakura is a bitch to Naruto, I still like her(just not with Naruto). So the dynamics between them were great.
    oddly made me happy he was chewing on clay 0.o

    I love the fact that you gave Akatsuki that kind of prison morality/honor amongst bad guys that don't go in for rape and/or child molesting (those people never last long in C block!)

    thanks for the fun:D


    ps -

    (Totally blaming any evilness on a fictitious evil persona lol)
    sure honey...sure. (pats you on head in a placating manner)

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  • From Travellyr on October 03, 2009
    No, thank you for making something lovely to share! I'm glad my review made you happy. (And yeah, I was okay. I wore my slippers to work instead of shoes, and flopped backwards in my chair, for lo, the back is squishy and adjusts, and there was coffee, and it was good. ^^)

    And this... reading eight chapters at once has spoiled me! I got used to easily-resolved cliffhangers. XD

    the scene with Sakura... I liked that. It would've been interesting to see how it played out if Deidara had been able to execute his plan... to just turn it off and never tell her, just because he didn't want to see her look at him like he was a good person. Now that thread of the narrative is a little trainwreck festival, complete with pink pinata. X3

    Kakuzu charms me. I don't know why- he's cranky and fussy and is all about his paperwork, is not at all nice or obliging... heh, maybe that's why I like him. Straightforward, efficient, and a good foil for insanity. X3

    An update today was a nice gift after my first day answering angry customer service calls... Maybe you'll have another present for me Monday? (a woman can hope.) :3???

    Thanks!
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  • From Travellyr on September 30, 2009
    I'm enjoying this so much more than I thought I would... I clicked on a whim and wound up reading all eight parts in one go, even though I had to get up for work this morning... and two or three hours of sleep later, I don't regret it (yet, we'll see how I feel at 4:30.... ^^;;;). I giggled, I cried- you do a very good job with psychological realism and this story is a guilty pleasure, like eating candy by yourself so you don't have to share. I LOVE Deidara's "WHAT." interjected throughout the narrative- it's hilarious, portrays his personality perfectly, and excellently conveys that sense of -stop- people get when they're affronted.

    Please continue, and thanks so much for sharing!
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  • From mistressofyaoi on September 27, 2009
    thoughoughly enjoyed what i have read so far (and chapter 3 is tame compaired to what i am currently writting) i am enjoying this, its a couple i have never seen and i like the idea of kakashi being with someone besides iruka or sasuke
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