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Reviews for Campaign of Distraction

By : yolotengo
  • From juggaletteuchiha on May 09, 2010
    im not big on ita/naru but this was hot. i must say i loved it aND CANT WAIT TO READ MORE.
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  • From serenagold on December 15, 2009
    ((O_O))
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  • From serenagold on October 24, 2009
    lol hormones.
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  • From serenagold on October 23, 2009
    Ack!! This is so wrong... WRONG!!! Bad influential Naruto!!! What are you doing?!!



    Keep up the good work! ^^
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  • From ANON - Nami on October 22, 2009
    That was a really cute chapter. Of coarse, by cute I do mean hot. Yes, hot is the proper term for it *faaaans self*. It's a shame you lost a portion of your rp, though. But I'm looking forward to the next one.
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  • From serenagold on October 20, 2009
    No Naruto! Bad! Wrong. This is horrible advice! lol
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  • From ANON - Nami on October 04, 2009
    This is me grinning like a fool alll the way through. Naruto, I'm with you on the 'you're adorable' cause I was sniggering and shaking my head like OH THAT CUTE LITTLE BRAT and simultaneously feeling for Itachi XD. EGADS. I do love Itachi's characterization here, though. And I'm wondering how the poor man hasn't torn out all his hair in frustration ._.!!
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  • From serenagold on September 19, 2009
    Man, the Uchiha family is all sorts of messed up. lol.

    Keep up the good work.
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  • From serenagold on September 18, 2009
    Sasuke is such a brat! I hope he wont be foolish enough to fall for Orochimaru's seductions. Nasty disgusting pedofile.

    Keep up the good work!
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  • From ANON - Nami on September 16, 2009
    How did Itachi not spank that kid the last chapter XD!? I was just holding my breath for the 'and then Itachi tossed the brat over his knee and spanked him, and enjoyed it way too much'. He's an insufferable git, but it's cute on Sasuke. Like he acts like he knows, but he's so... young. I see what you meant by acting younger because he's a little emotionally stunted. Like he can't figure things through and doesn't know how to get what he'd like without kicking up a fuss. It's somehow cute. How does that work? And omg, poor Itachi. It's what happens when you have a cute little brother, you wind up unconsciously spoiling them XD. And I like how with Naruto and Itachi's interaction is was like 'that's hot. I'd tap that', and with Sasuke we see more of a 'that's ho-wha...? It's a teen/my baby brother... but it's hot and I'd tapwhaaa? Stop that hormones D:'. It promises for an interesting... relationship development XD.

    And oooh, dear. Orochi the pervert and part time pedo. And OMG. Jiriya... and Sasuke. There will either be blood or Jiriya will throw him to the wolves in self defense of his sanity, provided Sasuke continues on his brat streak XD.
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  • From serenagold on September 16, 2009
    You know, I feel slightly offended by this chapter. "The heinous screaming of Opeth," really? You couldn't think of a different band? Maybe something from the black metal genre or even straight death metal? Honestly, some of the guitar work and singing from Opeth's catalog of music are absolutely beautiful compositions. Even their more traditional death metal songs are broken up with fantastic instrumentals. Opeth is probably one of my favorite bands of all time.

    Yeah. Definitely offended.

    Keep up the good work, but try to lay off the uninformed bashing. Of all bands to pick.. sheesh.
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  • From daughterofvirgo on August 30, 2009
    Ibiki really pissed me off in Chapter 2. So now the cat's out of the bag about Itachi's "other job". I can't wait to see what Naruto brings to the story. Keep up the amazing work. Until next chapter...
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  • From daughterofvirgo on August 29, 2009
    Little Sasuke and Itachi were so cute together in chapter one. I can't wait to find out what Itachi's "other job" is. I have some guesses but I won't reveal them until I find out the answer. On to chapter 2...
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  • From Nyuchan on August 12, 2009
    Nice beginning! But one thing bugged me: You mentioned Sasuke's age twice and first you said he is 10 and the second time 8 years old. Which is the right one?

    But whatever. This story caught my eye. Keep it up! :-)

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  • From ANON - Anon on August 11, 2009
    This seems like a great beginning. Keep it up!
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