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Reviews for A Thousand Words

By : kaiyousama
  • From Prism0467 on August 14, 2009
    All right! Hot kiss!

    I love it that Naruto and Sasuke have Kakashi and Itachi for guardians. They will certainly keep things interesting!
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  • From xkuramaxhieix on August 14, 2009
    I don't know why, but this chapter was disappointing. I mean, it was good, but something about this chapter just made me feel disappointed. I think it's because you stretched out the bike ride too long and the coming home thing. If you'd broken this into two chapters, you could have gone into more passionate detail about Sasuke and Naruto making out. Plus, you could have played up the Itachi and Kakashi flirting bit. I mean, not have them really make out or anything, but play it up more, make it seem like they were about to passionately make out, touch each other or something.

    All in all, this chapter was good, but disappointing and leaving a lot to be desired. Sorry if I don't make sense. Hope I do, but it's okay if I don't.
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  • From Onyveth13 on August 14, 2009
    I'm really enjoying this story. You have quite a talent for describing artwork and colors! I hope there's more to come.
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  • From LadyLaran on August 09, 2009
    The re-birthday idea was a great one.
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  • From xkuramaxhieix on August 08, 2009
    So far so good. Although I think your latest chapters sexual tension was too much in the wrong places. It really should have been laid on thick when they were in the car and Sasuke had the blindfold on. You also could have gone a little deeper into the obvious sexual tension when it came to the dessert time. If you'd added more emphasis to that, I think I would have liked the chapter a lot more.
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  • From Prism0467 on August 08, 2009
    Two young gay hotties, best friends and mutual secret crushes. Whatever are they going to do? ^_^ I can't wait to find out!

    Great chapter.
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  • From Kerrisa on August 08, 2009
    Mmm, where can I find more of your work?

    I stumbled across you yesterday, and after reading one of your fics I immediately checked to see if you had any other fics posted, and when i found the other fic, I red it as well. I. Love. You. I can't remember which fic I read first, and I'm not gonna try, because they are both outstanding and I need to leave each with a separate review to do them any justice. Now to focus on this fic and tell what I liked about it!

    What stands out most to me is Naruto's and Sasuke's friendship and their hobbies. I love how Naruto is an artist focusing on paint and how Sasuke is a photographer. Just imagining the pieces they've created and collaborated on makes me wanna grab my camera and run out to photograph the next sunset or head off to an art museum and spend hours looking at different styles of paintings. I'm an art major myself (emphasis in graphic design) so I love nearly everything art related.

    I think its kinda fun how both Naruto and Sasuke discovered they were gay in two completely different ways and dealt with that discovery in equally different ways. Buuuut since they are practically polar opposites that makes sense. Either way I absolutely adore it ( lol and Sasuke's love for tomatoes, of all things) and I am so looking forward to Sasuke's birthday surprise and the development of their relationship since we all know those two are gonna end up together, It's just how they get to that point that we're not certain of. ... Well, "we're" as in the readers, you've probably got a pretty good idea about how things will go for our favorite boys xD

    Oh, I love Aniki Itachi. It's always so fun reading Itachi as the stable big brother figure. Makes ya wanna hug him, and then pray he doesn't find any embarrassing snap shots of yourself to post all over the web or hold for blackmail... That would suck...

    Keep doing what you're doing! It's beyond awesome! =D
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  • From Prism0467 on August 06, 2009
    Hmmm...Sasuke blindfolded.

    Yes.
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  • From ANON - vanillaxrain on August 04, 2009
    I love this story. It just leaves me wanting more. I'm usually not a fan of au because it always seems that the personality of the characters get lost, but you stick to the original personality perfectly. cant wait to read more so update!
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  • From Prism0467 on August 04, 2009
    Confessions are cool to write, aren't they?
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  • From Mija on August 03, 2009
    ooh I LOVE this, the descriptions of the salt beds and the sky and the river, all of it painted a pretty mental picture that I would soo love to see in life, and I totally love the friendship between Sasu and Naru as well as Itachi and Kakashi, and really the brotherly love of the Uchihas is too cute and sweet, I think I love the collaboration between pictures and Naru's artwork that sounds like the perfect combo, all in all, this was an amazing first chapter and I cant wait to read more, ty ty ty for the read, huggles and smiles Mija...:-)
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  • From ANON - Angel on August 02, 2009
    Wow. Sad to say but I have scavenged a whole multitude of fics, SasuNARU, NaruSASU (bwaaah, what can I say it's an obses...er passion LOL)... recently I've resorted to reading whatever there is to encounter...and have not encountered one as vibrant, vivacious, verdant as this in quite a WHILE! Your descriptions actually distracted me from the whole SasuNARU focus LOL (all the more brilliant imo as I abhor descriptions, seriously, SERIOUSLY! :))

    You've laid a fertile ground full of possibilities and I really cannot wait for the rest.

    Kudos :)

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  • From Prism0467 on August 02, 2009
    Great beginning. Looking forward to more.
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