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Reviews for A Thousand Words

By : kaiyousama
  • From sasunarufan456 on August 08, 2010
    you should really read dagger stiletto's stories their a lot like yours, and if your making a sequal i wish you the best of hope,good luck!
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  • From sasunarufan456 on August 08, 2010
    that picture sounded amasing and so abstract!!!!
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  • From DogandPoo on May 26, 2010
    Wow, I have to say that I love how you paced the story. They were acting age appropriate and didn't simply jump into the smut when they both confessed so for taking your time with it, I thank you. And I don't think this is too sweet at all~ You portrayed the whole 'innocent first love' thing very very well and both Naruto and Sasuke managed to stay in character even through all the lovey dovey stuff that would SO not happen in canon. I'm looking forward to see a sequel to this! And of course, I will also be supporting you if you are going to write original fiction. I'd love to see you shape your own little world =D

    Cheers
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  • From Halskr on August 30, 2009
    I enjoyed this. The imagery in their pictures and paintings was very sweet. You described them so well it was easy for me to picture. I am looking forward to reading more of your take on them in a sequel while they are at college. Thanks for writing and sharing this.
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  • From Prism0467 on August 27, 2009
    Honto kawaii!

    Looking forward to the sequel!
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  • From daughterofvirgo on August 25, 2009
    Naruto and Sasuke were so confused about how to tell the other what they were feeling that I got confused. I don't know what Sasuke's got planned but I hope it works. Until next chapter...
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  • From xkuramaxhieix on August 22, 2009
    This chapter was too short, clipped and kinda cut off. I think for the talk, it should be angsty and inflict pain on Sasuke. I mean, Sasuke knows how he feels, and naruto is confused which would make sense.
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  • From HitomiKanzaki on August 22, 2009
    Hmmmm, I Love This Story and I Love That You Update Often;; Keep Up The Good Work Man
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  • From Prism0467 on August 22, 2009
    Yay update! I love the way you had them both working through their feelings, they were right to be anxious and uncertain. I'm also glad that Sasuke has the presence of mind to deal with the issues instead of being the kind of man who runs and hides.

    I love your story, it's...heartfelt. Sincere.

    Please keep up the excellent work!
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  • From Kerrisa on August 22, 2009
    Ahh! So exciting!! I moved to a new location, had absolutely no internet for like 2 weeks, and when i do get it and have a chance to check up on fic updates, there are three new ones for this story!!! I was so happy =D I just finished reading the last chapter and let me tell you they were amazing! Lol poor Naruto! Going green at the thought of escargot, its actually really really good! My mom ordered some once on a cruise we went on and only let me have two... stingy =/ I am a very, very, very non-active person, but reading about their mountain bike ride (minus Naruto's crash) almost makes me wanna consider giving biking another chance. At least earlier in the morning when its still chilly out. I live in California, in the afternoons, it gets hot =/ Uwahhh~ So much going on in these chapters, I'm kinda all over the place. They made out!! That was awesome! But now they are both dealing with it in completely different ways. I'm concerned about Naruto's reaction... even moreso after what Itachi said... I can only hope things will work out well for them, and neither Itachi or Kakashi will have to kill off a young person xD That would be so not cool! Lol *Glomps* You do make me so very happy. I think I caught a glimpse of you speaking about being too lazy to find a beta in a review response that was above the Review this Story link. If you want one I'd like to volunteer my services *bows like a butler* Now that I've got my internet back *Tears of joy* I can read til my lil heart is content~ Think about it, ne ne? My email address should be visible for ya... Well I'm off to see if i what I thought was another one of your stories was actually updated. Ja ne~
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  • From daughterofvirgo on August 21, 2009
    Great story. I was looking for something a few weeks ago that wasn't just a mindless sex-filled story and I happened upon "A Thousand Words". I love how you described Sasuke's photos and Naruto's portrait. I love how caring Itachi is as a brother. This is definitely one of my favorite stories now. Please keep up the good work.
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  • From Prism0467 on August 18, 2009
    The Uchiha brothers have 'the talk.' I think it went well.
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  • From xkuramaxhieix on August 18, 2009
    I think Itachi got a little too ooc in this chapter. I think the Deidara bit was stretching it just a biiiit too far.


    Sasuke blinked. Once. Twice. Three times. And found himself speechless.

    Exactly how I feel other than that.
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  • From Onyveth13 on August 15, 2009
    *giggle* I never get tired of reading different takes on the first SasuNaru kiss. This is a good one. Very realistic.

    Your line about teens ("teens could be moody, he supposed it was part of the job description") had me laughing out loud. It's so true...

    The editor in me needs to point out that there's a typo in the section about the race, as Sasuke is going up the second hill: it reads tired instead of tire, or perhaps tires?

    I hope you don't mind a bit of constructive criticism; there was one thing that I reread a few times and felt awkward about: Itachi says to Sasuke, "I suppose I should trust you to play with matches if you decide to use the fireplace?" I think it might be better if it read, "I suppose I should trust you to use the fireplace if you decide to play with matches?" or maybe "I suppose I should trust you with the matches if you decide to use the fireplace?" if you didn't really want it to be funny, but more of a rhetorical question.

    *wants more story*
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  • From jordash00 on August 14, 2009
    I read this story on ff.net and could not remember my stupid password. Anyway, I truly love the plot that you have developed here. I always enjoy those stories that take the time to actually develop a plot and not just jump head first into what they think the audience may want. I also appreciate your characterization of Naruto and Sasuke in this fic. They seem to both have thier "issues" and you are not spending more time devoloping one over the other. You have given them their equal share of plot time.

    I am looking forward to more!
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