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Reviews for Mixed Communication

By : kaiyousama
  • From Carousel on May 28, 2010
    I love this story line. I'm so eager to see how the rest comes together. Not to mention the smut is fantastic.
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  • From ANON - Anon on May 27, 2010
    Wow. You held us in suspence on Dei's show for some time. It was really intense. Love the risk taking Dei and love the evil, revengeful Itachi.
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  • From Prism0467 on May 27, 2010
    LOL "Do you have baseball in Japan?"

    Whoever said "baka" was straight on the money.

    The Japanese reinvented the sport!
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  • From Prism0467 on May 27, 2010
    Itachi and Diedara.

    Man, that's hot.
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  • From missbri88 on May 26, 2010
    Yaaaaay!!! I'm so happy that you're back and posting. I started the story completely over again cuz its been so long that I needed the refresher. I still love the story and Jiji has me wondering what the fuck is he thinking... Lol. I can't wait to see more, so until then.

    Ja!
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  • From ANON - richon on May 26, 2010
    I really enjoy reading your story. i want to know what shikamaru has in mind and what itachi will say. I am craving for more !! see you soon
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  • From ANON - 7troublesome on May 26, 2010
    Lovely story - especialy after the stroy of Dei and Ita started - who could ever have thought that Itachi could be patient and kind - wow! And I am totally fascinated about the part where Naruto was planning to take a job in Ambassy, right? Totally awesome, the copmarison to positive reincarnation of Hitler is so frickin' funny!
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  • From DogandPoo on May 26, 2010
    Damn, love the smut. Heh. To start with, your story idea; very creative. I only wish that you could have played a bit more with that gag though, there's so much you can do with a theme like that. P=

    Compared to your first story, this one is a lot more of what I'd encounter in the fandom (not that it's a bad thing) but it's missing that pacing of yours that I really liked. Some part of the getting into the sex part felt a bit surreal.

    The ItaDei interlude felt a bit forced. It would have been great if you have found a way to ease it into the story. It felt more like FYI instead of a part of the story. It would have worked better if you teased us with a bit of info and then made a spin-off. Am I making sense here? >_o

    Anyways, overall, I'm so watching you, because the characters are funny, your jokes are witty and it's a good story =D

    Cheers
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  • From ANON - Anon on May 25, 2010
    Naughty Itachi & Dei. Maybe Naru can give Sasuke a personal underwear-wearing air guitar solo performance to assuage his guilt.
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  • From ANON - Anon on May 25, 2010
    i liked the flow of that chapter...i'm starting to get worried about the "leaving".....poor sasuke-kun he's going to lose his love again...uhg...angsty feeling....but i know you'll work it out lovely...can't wait to read more...thanks for the update.
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  • From Prism0467 on May 25, 2010
    That whole 'composed Uchiha' schtick is mondo-annoying. Just once I'd like to see Sasuke get rip-roaring drunk, don a lampshade and stand on a table doing a striptease.

    Maybe you could figure out a way to write that into your next story.
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  • From ANON - airhead622 on May 24, 2010
    yay!!! u updated again :) great chapter :)
    and did u mention sumthing about a sidefic???
    i'm officially interested!!! would the sidefic still b sasunaru
    or will it be focusing more on other couples?
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  • From SoSickOfNyQuil on May 23, 2010
    LoL omg reading the part about the housekeeper going after Naruto with the broom... It made me LoL haha!And I'm glad Itachi is back I was beginning to feel bad for poor Dei =3
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  • From cynaga on May 23, 2010
    delightfully fun romp!~
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  • From ANON - Anon on May 23, 2010
    Poor Naru... getting interupted in the middle of some fine underwear-wearing air guitar strumming. Makes you wonder if Sasuke intentionally "forgot" to tell Naru to watch out for the cleaning lady as revenge for his work-time fun. Also could be that Naru is just such an intense distraction that it just slipped his mind. Hmmmm... In either case, totally funny for us. :)
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