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Reviews for One Rainy Night

By : wolfnoreika
  • From ANON - Sara on August 05, 2009
    I love your story and I could totally see Naruto being that depressed. I would imagine them (a.k.a. naruto plus friends) as Jounin rank. Not that you have to do that but thats how I picture them. Please update again soon. I fell in love with your story.
    Sara
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  • From hieisdragoness18 on August 05, 2009
    aww poor naru! sasuke better get his ass back to his blond!
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  • From arabuzumaki on August 05, 2009
    I'm glad he made it home safely ^_^
    To answer your question. Here is what i think
    - Naru, Sasu, Sakura, Kiba, Hina, Shino, Shika, Ino, Cho, Gaara (16)- Naru told his dad he was 16, so i assumed as they were all in the same year group at the academy, minus Gaara, his flashbacks made me think him and naru are the same age.
    - Neji, Lee, TenTen, kankuro (17)
    -Temari (18) Beacuse she is older than kankuro.
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  • From missbri88 on August 05, 2009
    Im glad you like my excuse. lol. But its so true.

    Woow. Nice chapter. I believe Naruto would be a little depressed after having sex with Sasuke and then the bastard leaves him before he wakes up. I probably would be. And the morning after was funny. It was so Naruto. lol. I cant wait to see more.

    Oh. and I would guess then to be 17 years old and chunin?
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  • From missbri88 on July 30, 2009
    Your first real lemon? Wow. You did great. I still havent written a same sex lemon as of yet... But 3 chapters doesnt seem like it would do this plot justice. Please please please! Put out more. Sometimes emotional drama is all we can use to foward our writing. I have to be depressed to write. Thats why Im on hiatus.


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  • From hieisdragoness18 on July 29, 2009
    yeah it needs to be finished. its rather good for a first time all the way lemon.
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  • From ANON - Tansy Moon on July 27, 2009
    please add another chapter please
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  • From arabuzumaki on July 27, 2009
    this was not crappy at all. i liked it. what kind of bastard would leave someone in a cave with a fever lol
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  • From ANON - Anon on July 27, 2009
    Oh come on, put some plot into it! I mean, don't get me wrong, I like lemon, but straight in the second chapter without anything more interesting happening... please, at least update soon so we see what's gonna happen apart from wild male sex! Oh, btw don't worry - the sex scene was fine, just add some plot to it next time, ok? :P
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  • From kinai26 on July 27, 2009
    Wow that was a gooooood chappie. You did well, lemon can be tricky but you did really good.

    Hm talking isnīt something that everyone does. Some are vocal, others arent - so itīs up to you really. I personally liked the silence because it opened up to a different kind of sensuality. I hope that you will continue and write more than 3 chapters XD
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  • From kinai26 on July 26, 2009
    Please continue, I for one would like to read more.

    btw: anger is a good emotion when writing fiction, some of my best stories has come to life during times of anger or sadness XD

    Keep up the fine work
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  • From arabuzumaki on July 26, 2009
    lol i would like to see this completed. but were you in a foul mood when you typed the a/n as well lol, it just seemed harsh.
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