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By : xXStrifeXx
  • From ANON - Angel on July 27, 2009
    Oh my!!! Yikes! I cannot wait to read more of this...the 'act' was a bit blase with the two orifices used - VERY DANGEROUS for a woman to allow btw :) There are a couple of wrong words in there too I think - pounding and sthing else I cannot quite recall...not that they deterred me from the story it's just that I had to backtrack a couple of words to get a clearer view :)

    Otherwise utterly intriguing. The characters with the little you have shown of them are clearly defined. Not entirely sure of the universe as Hinata had met Kiba after her sessions with Naruto ;). Again, idiots LOL - there must've been a reason for them to use the backentrance (yikes I sound like a tween lol) and Naruto conts to wonder why he thinks of the Teme!

    Can't wait for more! Can't wait to see the Teme in action and to see whether he shares the same confusion as the Dobe! Yay :)


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  • From ANON - Anon on July 26, 2009
    I WANNA SEE THE NEXT CHAPTER ASAP!!! Good work, hope it's as good as it's promising to be! :)))))))
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