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By : Namet
  • From missbri88 on August 02, 2009
    CHICHI!! I teared up at little Naru's pain, but the fight had me laughing. I cant wait to see more. I do hope you post again before your trip
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  • From butterflies1974 on August 02, 2009
    Oh, I hope that you are able to update one more time before your trip to India. This story is great and I really enjoy it. And poor Naruto having to go through all that pain. :(
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  • From Bookworm51485 on August 01, 2009
    Not very accurate translations. I've always felt if you're not sure it's just safer not to use them. Using my limited knowledge, I'll try to help with some. But I've only gotten up to Japanese Intermediate 1 so I probably won't be completely right either.

    Please Father help: Onegai Chichi, tasukete

    Hurts: Itai (Itai yo)

    For the other two, 'Make the pain go away', I'm not sure of that one. And for the last, Onegai should be okay.

    I'm very curious what's going to happen next. And how Iruka's going to react when he comes back. I feel sorry for Kakashi, having to fight off two at the same time, both younger and closer to their primes than him. Let's hope though that Sasuke won't be an ass and will make an effort to keep Naruto happy right from the beginning.
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  • From ANON - Ivy on August 01, 2009
    Wow chapter 3 was amazing! The battle scene was so well-written. Kakashi is really strong to take on 2 dominants at the same time. Can't wait for the next chapter ;-)
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  • From ANON - Becky on August 01, 2009
    OMG!!!!!!!!! MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Can't wait for the next chapter to come out!!!!!
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  • From TrinityFromtheEraofBlood on August 01, 2009
    I wanna cookie!!!!!>.
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  • From TrinityFromtheEraofBlood on August 01, 2009
    This is soo good i hope you continue it!!!! i want to know what plot you have instore !!!
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  • From ANON - Ivy on July 27, 2009
    Can't wait for them to meet ^_^
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  • From anima270 on July 26, 2009
    plz tell me that they have milk too. Milk goes great with cookies. lol. But anyway, another gr8 chappie.
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  • From serenagold on July 26, 2009
    So Sasuke and Naruto will be mates, eh? Of course this is assuming they even let Naruto into that mating ceremony thingy. Maybe Sasuke will try to skirt his duties last second and wind up ending up with a mate as a surprise. heheh

    Keep up the good work!
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  • From butterflies1974 on July 26, 2009
    I feel the urge to join the darkside now that I know that you have cookies! LOL I really am taking an extreme liking to this story. I love how you have made everyone in the village a demon. That I think makes it more fun and makes the story better. I really like how you have Kakashi and Iruka in the story because those two are just so cute together. Thank you for a great read and I look forward to more.
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  • From missbri88 on July 20, 2009
    cute. I wanna see more -hands you a cookie-
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  • From butterflies1974 on July 20, 2009
    I say MORE! MORE! MORE! please....I can't wait to read more. Wow, this story is going to be great.
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  • From ANON - morlana on July 20, 2009
    So far it's looking good. I wonder if they are both hunting the smell good scent of Naruto.
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  • From ANON - Ivy on July 20, 2009
    Great 1st chapter! Can't wait to read how Sasuke meets Naruto ^_^
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