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Reviews for Divided Loyalty

By : gingermaya
  • From ANON - on July 03, 2016

    This is really a beautiful story! It has been a long time since I found something like this! I love it and admire all your hard work you put it into it! It just makes me sad that there is no other chapter for soo long :( .. Don't abandon this story! Pretty please!:))


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  • From ANON - Anon on December 04, 2014
    Please don't abandon this story :( there aren't a lot of Minato stories out there and I reloy like this one
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  • From Goldscythe on February 29, 2012
    I just simply love this and the previous. My favorite, actually, of all Naruto fanfics. And dayum, the smut scenes. They make my brain melt. Awesome writing, I'm still addicted to this and crave for more.
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  • From ANON - Anon on May 28, 2011
    All of your stories are very well written and thought out. I hope that you are doing well and that you're just very busy with real-life and haven't abandoned your enthralling stories.
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  • From MisatosPenPen on February 01, 2011
    I'm jonzin' here! Please, please, please continue. pretty please. With a prince albert on top . . .
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  • From sesshyfreak on January 16, 2011
    Q_Q there's not MOAR? haha i kno how hectic life can get (i'm reading this from a con hotel 3 hours from home instead of finishing the 5 days of drabbles i'm supposed to be working on...) but this story is so epic! i think that it's really emotional (you've made me cry more than a few times) and i believe they're really in-character! i was telling a het friend earlier, with yaoi, it's almost always either hit or miss. you've done a fantastic job on this story, and altho i REALLY dont like in-complete stufff, i can't NOT watch for more of this in the future. awesome job
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  • From MisatosPenPen on October 30, 2010
    Please continue!!!! I don't usually like Pein/anyone, but I love this and Questionable Loyalty. Please finish. I hope the two couples find each other and Minato finds his courage to face Kakashi.
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  • From Raeshi on July 13, 2010
    Hot!! Love that last scene there. Poor Kakashi though left all alone. Can't wait for the next chapter.
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  • From LightShadowsh on May 31, 2010
    oh my god! this is one GREAT story... please! PLEASE update soon.
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  • From ANON - satterb on January 14, 2010
    Oh yay! I'm so happy to see Minato easing up on Pein. This was a wonderful chapter on so many levels. I feel a sense of relief, Kakashi will start to get better, the sex was beautiful! I loved the dirty talk...you know I do, and I even got a little hot over the panties...and you know how I used to feel about that. You've turned me into a cross dressing junkie! LOL. Thanks for all your hard work. I've just started school myself and it's taking some effort to get used to the change of pace. Good luck to you, I miss you and I look forward to more as always, your faithful fan!
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  • From MellyMoo on December 09, 2009
    This... is beyound awesome :) love how well everything works together but I do have one small problem with everything and was hoping you could explian it to me (you might have already and I just missed it, so in that case sorry for making you repeat yourself) but why are Sasuke and Kisame together? To me it just seems so random and not to upset or annoy you or anything, but to me it doesn't fit.
    But either way this is epic and I really feel for Kakashi
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  • From ANON - Googledi on December 07, 2009
    Yay. Minato still has feelings for Kakashi, I'm sorry that Nagato's being treated like that and all, but I just love the pairing, YonKaka is my OTP after all :) Hope the two will meet soon!
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  • From ANON - freehugs on December 06, 2009
    I've been following this story for a pretty long while now, from about when Questionable was half way through. I finaly got around to opening an account, so now I can review your wonderful work! I love the interactions between Nagato and Minato, and I really hope Minato's mean streak is over. I also can't wait for the truth to come out, and see how everyone reacts! Keep up the good work!
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  • From ANON - satterb on December 06, 2009
    Hell yeah! These two are becoming so sexy together. I'm looking forward to a time when Kakashi's comforts increase. I hate the idea that he's sleeping in a run-down shack exposed to the elements. I look forward to more, and I love this new Minato. I just couldn't believe he could be so completely heartless. You Rock! And now another name change???? Love and miss you....Beth
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  • From ANON - satterb on November 04, 2009
    I want to cry about this situation. I can't help but almost feel the destitution. I'm happy you've split this chapter between the two couples. Kisame and Sasuke took a little of the edge off. I can't wait to see things get better for Kakashi. I don't want to rush you, but it's almost more than I can bear. And I know they've got a long way to go still. Please keep up the great work. Thanks for all you do! Love Beth
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