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By : gingermaya
  • From ANON - Yuki on October 21, 2009
    Don't worry, I, your loyal reader, am still reading! ^^
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  • From ANON - satterb on October 15, 2009
    Oh Bloody Hell! This was fantastic! I love your Kisame, and I love how you've done Sasuke. They are so real it's almost scary. Everything is believable and all the characters are still manly and, well, just as they should be. You were pretty subtle with the angst in Kisames backstory about Itachis death. I kind of surprised me. I can completely see that Kisame would shun any attention from anyone after loosing Itachi. I'm just really glad that you have him taking care of Sasuke. He's really what Sasuke has always needed. I think you did an excellent job on this. I've really missed chatting with you, hopefully one day soon we'll get back in touch. In the meantime, sorry to hear of your troubles. I hope things are working out for you now. Take care of yourself, and keep up the great work in your writing! Love and miss you...Satterb
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  • From ANON - satterb on September 12, 2009
    This is soooo painful to read! It's so good, I hate when the chapters come to an end. Poor Kakashi and Nagato. The realism is unbelievable! I love Pakuun too. He's so crass and straight forward. Very fun to read. Really, I'm having a hard time reviewing because this story leaves me almost speachless. I will be very relieved when Minato finally finds Kakashi. Even though it's going to cause Kakashi so much pain. And Nagato will probably be left feeling inadequate but I just want the physical torment to stop. Keep up the tremendous work. I look forward to more. Love ya....Beth
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  • From jordash00 on September 02, 2009
    Is poor Kakashi going to come out of this one ok and back to normal?


    I love the way your are building the characters here and taking the time to explain the background with Minato and his reasons for wanting to fix things with Kakashi as well as his want for him.

    Thank you for responding to my question regarding the other fic.

    I look forward to seeing this through!
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  • From ANON - carpediem on September 01, 2009
    Love the story! Is there going to be a sequel for Hurt Me? Poor Itachi, can't silence the voices :(

    Uhh, I just wanted to clear up something...Kakashi was 13 when he became Jounin, when Obito died and gave him his Sharingan, and he was 14 when the Kyuubi attacked, so by the time he was 16, Minato was dead. You can tell because the Kyuubi attacked when Naruto was just born (and what are the chances of that? Kishi is messing up Naruto) and Kakashi is 14 years older than Naruto, so he was 14 when Naruto was born and the Kyuubi attacked.
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  • From ANON - satterb on September 01, 2009
    This was so beautifully written! Poor Kakashi. He's trying so hard. And I'm finding I have to try hard not to hate Minato! LOL. Your description of his treatment of Kakashi was so vivid. It's hard not to bear a grudge! Thanks for updating. I look forward to more. On a personal note, my move is done and I start school in January. So excited! I'll just be thankful when I have internet again. Waaaaah!
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  • From ANON - Googledi on August 25, 2009
    How come you didn't mention Kakashi? You made me love the whole pein+Kakashi pairing though, heck I didn't even know that pairing exsisted! Hope you write more of it since you maybe the only person alive who can pull this pairing off.
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  • From ANON - satterb on August 25, 2009
    Ok, just to let you know I've been moving and no longer have internet at the moment. Waaaaaah! But I'm finding ways to long on for a minute or two here and there. But I loved the update, and I don't think you did such a bad job with Fugaku...we don't really get to see alot of him in the manga, and what we do see is pretty much him acting like a big asshole jerk, so I think you nailed him pretty good. I love this pair. Thanks for sharing more of their story...and I think you'll make a good mom someday...Hee! Love ya. Beth
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  • From satterb on August 17, 2009
    Oh, Oh, Oh!!! Thank you so much for this chapter. I (apparently) loved it! I thought it was beautiful to see them working together and I especially enjoyed the clever way you thought to have them describe their chakras to each other. I'm glad Sasuke isn't a total brat. I prefer him stoic and even though he's still young, I feel he should be more than his years. Thanks for all your hard work on this! Loved it and you! Later girl!
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  • From ANON - Yuki on August 13, 2009
    Satterb: I suspect he has to feed to replenish an energy source. =) To "keep the body from rejecting the soul" as Laracroft wrote, but what I mean is that the blood is like an energy drink to the bonds that probably keep Nagato's soul rooted in Yahiko's body. Or something like that. XD
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  • From ANON - Yuki on August 13, 2009
    Good chapter! I like the way you're steadily building up Minato's role and personality by giving us insight on his past experiences regarding Kakashi and inner feelings. =) And the way Minato compares himself to Nagato... excellent. it gives us a solid ground on which to build up the reader's view of the world you've placed Kakashi and Nagato in. Very nice. =D I'd almost thought you'd died, or been stranded on a desert island because there was no update for at least a week... XD

    Anyways, excellent job, and I'm following it every time it updates! (although I might not always have the time to review, since I often read when I'm not supposed to... *shifty eyes*)

    Keep updating!
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  • From satterb on August 09, 2009
    Oh my God!!!! It's so painful to watch, and I am deathly curious as to why Nagato needs to feed on other humans. I can't wait to see what that's all about. I had the best time Friday...I love the way your mind works too! I would really like to see some of the story from Kakashi's viewpoint. Keep up the great work. I really look forward to more. Love ya....Beth
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  • From satterb on August 01, 2009
    Kakashi and Nagato's situation is so damned sad. I almost can't stand it! The dynamic between these two has become so bittersweet. Kakashi realizes what Nagato is going through is just as much for Kakashi as it is because of Kakashi. They're both victims of terrible circumstances. Almost seems like it would be better to be dead, but they love each other too much to let go. I also love the petulant and childish behaviour of Sasuke. Kisame is the perfect character to be so long suffering. Thanks for all your hard work on this. I love ya girl! Take care of yourself!
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  • From ANON - Yuki on July 29, 2009
    Can't wait for the next chapter. This is just like your other Writing- can't entirely predict where it's going to go. =D
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  • From polaris on July 27, 2009
    welcome back!
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