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Reviews for Pupil of the Serpent

By : Mario
  • From Krissael on February 24, 2013
    I LOVE your story! I ship Anko and Orochimaru hard! Lol and you did a good job on Killer Bee. I like him a lot. Anyway, I hope you will read and review my story, "The Killing" some time! :D
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  • From Krissael on February 20, 2013
    I LOVE this fic! I hope that you will take a look at mine as well! It is also my first fanfiction to be posted online, and it is called "The Killing." I hope that you continue this fic soon, as I love it so much!
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  • From ANON - Mizuru007 on February 18, 2013
    Woah, hey man, it's been a looong while, huh?
    I tried staying away from AFF for a while to focus on life, but stumbled back for the sake of nostalgia. How's it going? In any case, loved the last chapter and this one. You've still got a good handle on the characters despite years passing since the last chapter, which is hard to do, so kudos!

    I'll definitely bookmark this baby and look forward to more regular updates!
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  • From Skyrere on December 20, 2012
    honestly, I am new to this site and I don't know how to get alerts that authors have posted chapters. I don't even know how to add an author or story to a favorites list.
    nice chapter btw...
    I would like to read more.

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  • From Skyrere on December 20, 2012
    mmmmm... anko cookies...
    I have to admit that I am turned on by the dangerous snake.
    I loooove aggressive men.
    I am such a dirty old woman... XD

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  • From ANON - NinjaSheik on May 03, 2012
    Hey, sorry to bother, but since I don't have an account here and your profile doesn't show your e-mail, I'm sending you something through the story

    I thought you'd like to see this~ http:// www.anime44 .com/ naruto-shippuden-episode- 261/2

    It might get your motivation up! Just take out the spaces, I don't know if the website can display links or not. See ya, and update soon!
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  • From ANON - NinjaSheik on April 30, 2012
    Hi, Repression! I'm one of your biggest fan! I absolutely love your fic, and when I came to check on it, I was so surprised to see you actually updated after all this time. I actually thought the fic was pretty much dead, but I'm super glad to see you update this awesome chapter! Believe it~! :) How've you been? Have you been keeping up with the Naruto chapters?

    In any case, I REALLY LOVED THIS CHAPTER! My favorite part was this:


    The small kunoichi tapped her cheek with a finger, looking thoughtful. “Um, let’s see… To get stronger than everyone, except Orochimaru-sensei, of course. To make Orochimaru-sensei proud of me. Oh, and to make Orochimaru-sensei accept me as his woman.”

    The pale-skinned man sighed. “Ugh. Those goals are really creepy. Are you some sort of stalker?”

    “Yup!” Anko answered proudly. The snake Sannin shook his head despairingly.



    LOL~! Anko is so cute! I cannot my happiness to see you update this chapter! It was great! You kept captured Anko and Orochimaru chapters as always, and your even though you haven't updated in such a long time, I can you still have that writer spunk in you!

    If you read my previous reviews, you know I added your incredible fic to an OroAnko fanclub~ http://www.narutoforums.com/showthread.php?t=130088

    It's on the second post. If you ever have time, drop by and join us! I look forward to your next chapter. And you know, I'll try my best to help revive your fic to its former glory because I really hope you'll continue this til the end. They're so few OroAnko authors who actually does that, finish their stories, and I hope you won't be one of those people that goes back on their word. I have faith in you! :)

    UPDATE SOON~! :)

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  • From ANON - NinjaSheik on May 31, 2011
    Greetings, fellow OroAnko author! I apologize for bothering of from what you are doing at the moment, but it is with great pride that I, NinjaSheik, announce to you that your OroAnko fic(s) have been added to the front forum of the Odaxelagnia: The Anko x Orochimaru Fanclub!

    As a fellow OroAnko author, I encourage you and many others to please check out the front forum of the fanclub and read and review the many great fics posted along with your fic(s) and check out the AMVs that were worthy of being put on there! I'm certain you will find many fics to your liking, and I hope you will continue to support the Orochimaru x Anko pairing in the future!

    That is all! Thank you and please check on the front forum and read and review for the awesome stories!

    P.S: On a side note, I am posting my new OroAnko fic tomorrow and if you are one of my good friends, then I hope you will check it out. And if it isn't too much trouble, copy and paste this message and send it anyone who will be interested in the pairing, as I am doing with you, [insert your username here].

    Good-bye now!

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  • From ANON - Seth on May 12, 2011
    Amazing story thus far i cannot wait for more.
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  • From ANON - NinjaSheik on August 11, 2010
    Hey, me again. I just came to tell you how much I really love this story you're writing, and I hope you're not going to give it up!

    Well...The real reason I'm here is because I was wondering about something; Have you ever heard about Fanfiction. Net? I think you should also post the Pupil of the Serpent there as well!

    I can't get this story out my head! It's driving me crazy waiting for you to update! According to last date you updated, that was a year ago! Well, I hope you think about making a account on FF. Net. It's the biggest fanfic writing site on the web!

    Well, see ya.
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  • From ANON - NinjaSheik on August 01, 2010
    LOVED IT~!! UPDATE SOON!
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  • From JigokuDayu on June 13, 2010
    I only just found this fic and I can't wait for more chapters! It's cute, but dark and sexy at the same time. By the way, please do get to the rampant sex and cruelty one of these days, because that's all that's missing! The sword and sheath bit was hilarious, too. And oddly, one of my favourites things about it is how you write Jiraiya. He's so level-headed and likeable for a change (his immaturity in the anime often gets on my nerves). Anyway, I guess I'll just have to get to work on my own fics while waiting for the next chapter. So get to work, lazy! Just kidding. Great job!
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  • From ANON - hajnalmadar on May 12, 2010
    I love this story SO MUCH! I can't believe the fandom had such a talented, fantastic writer and I NEVER KNEW ABOUT YOU BEFORE :-) I'm so glad I found this story even if it's just the beginning and likely won't ever be finished.
    In a way that makes me very sad:(
    In a way it makes me a little hopeful. To tell the truth when I was looking for Oro-Anko fics I wanted to read something dark, mad and twisted, and instead I found this gem, it's not mad, it's not so dark and not so twisted and the thing is, I don't mind that at all. Because I love the atmosphere of this fic! I love your Orochimaru & Anko! But seriously, probably as the author you don't feel how manly, sexy, cool your Orochimaru is! 100x more, than in the anime! Your Orochimaru deserves a MUCH better plot than what the anime offered for him! Noooo, I don't want this story ending up like the original storyline!! T_T That would be so predictable, so sad, so screwed up, such a *loss*! Aren't fanfictions for creating an alternative?! *hopeful, begging look*
    All in all, your fic is magical. So rare, so precious to me to read such a quality work. Thank you so much, even if it was only a glimpse, you inspired me.
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  • From ANON - Xemnas on January 17, 2010
    Very interesting story....the borderline pedophilia thing is a bit creepy, and yet all too amusing.
    Your making Lord Orochimaru very hard to dislike in this story. As a matter a fact, you've got no one to hate at all,
    which is really the only downside to this story. No real antagonist, not even Orochimaru himself....
    With that small, and obviously temporary, flawl this story still stands tall.
    Keep up the good work. I can't stop reading....
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  • From ANON - Catt on October 23, 2009
    Alright, I figured I'd review. I adore it! I think it's cute. Admittedly, I'm hoping to get to more... intimate stuff sooner, but the story is so good I can wait. ^^ Over all, WOOT!
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