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Reviews for Bloodlines

By : jadecorby
  • From Tamara on August 28, 2009
    heh it just sounds so wrong to follow ramen into the forest. hehe. Leave it to Itachi to instigate the sharingan. Sasuke why aren't you keeping an ear our on your little kittling?!!
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  • From serenagold on August 27, 2009
    Took him down on his first try with the Shirigan! Nice work, Haku!!



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  • From serenagold on August 15, 2009
    Oh my! Stranger Danger!!!!!

    Run!!
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  • From anima270 on August 08, 2009
    I wonder what is in Modern Kunoichi Magazine? And why is Sakura reading it in the first place? (O_o) Okay, never mind............. But I did enjoy Sai in this chapter, but I am curious when Sasuke comes back into the story, if he does. I really hope he does........... Can't wait for the next chapter.
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  • From navajo on August 04, 2009
    Please update soon can't wait to see nejiband naruto together
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  • From serenagold on July 26, 2009
    OH noes!! Did I just read some epic foreshadowing in this chapter!!! Haku! Clutch that stuffed kitty with your life!!! Things are about to go horribly wrong!!!!! :O


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  • From anima270 on July 24, 2009
    yay u finally updated. But I do wonder how Naruto got pregnant the first time because Kabuto was there and I was curious if Sasuke had any involvement besides offering his sperm. Did he have sex with Naruto or did Kabuto do something? U know Kabuto and his crazy ass ideas. And let's not 4get Orochimaru. Seems like I'm rambling now so I'll stop.
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  • From arabuzumaki on July 24, 2009
    i really love haku he is so sweet. he really pulls the heart strings ^_^. i hope we get neji's pov on the marriage soon.
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  • From serenagold on July 24, 2009
    O_O Oh noes! Haku!!!
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  • From missbri88 on July 24, 2009
    Well Im new to this story and it wowed me. I'd like to see more. And email me if you would like the help of a beta. missbri88 at hotmail
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  • From arabuzumaki on July 24, 2009
    wow wedding plans in full swing. i hope it doesn't come to pass. i hope sasu does something. and why is itachi such a twisted bastard?
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  • From mls1971 on July 17, 2009
    can't wait to read the next chapter!!!!!!
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  • From serenagold on July 16, 2009
    Ah!! lol.

    Sasuke sure isn't going to like that.
    Nor, for that matter, will Naruto tolerate ANY of his children to be branded with the branch seal. The council is just asking for a world of trouble.
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  • From arabuzumaki on July 15, 2009
    lol the lengths a mommy will go for his baby lol. he'll marry akamaru lmao. akamaru is quite a handsome dog lmao. ohhhh neji *drool* i wonder if sasuke is on his way back? those elders sure piss me off but damn they have good taste ^_^
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  • From knightkat on July 15, 2009
    You know that is an intresting twist. If you don't mind a siggestion, I would have Naruto make some demands besides protecting Haku... Say, like no child of his with Hyuuga blood gets he cage bird seal, that the Hyuugas have to come up with a new seal that protects the bloodline from theft or hyuuga going missing nin that isn't doubling as a slave collar. One that he would even allow Haku to have, seeing as he has a dojutsu also, so it would be sfe for 'main' branch children to have. I mean that would be worth it, cause just protecting his sons sanity to become a baby factory for a clan that enslaves all but a few members is a real high price... But I happen to love (and don't find enough) Neji/Naru...so thank you!!!
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