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Reviews for Bloodlines

By : jadecorby
  • From Dorkchic on March 24, 2010
    Have to wonder how Sasuke feels about Naruto getting married. They talked about him coming home, but not about the marriage. It is obvious that while it was not Neji's idea he is not uncomfortable with the concept. I do have to wonder how the council would enforce their wishes. What would happen if Naruto simply said no to their orders concerning marriage and/or Haku going to the academy early. What could they possibly do?

    As far as I am aware there is no law that gives the elders the power to force people to marry or dictate how their children are raised (except in cases of child abuse...etc.) Those things have always fallen under clan laws and seeing as Naruto has no clan then they have no claim. I can see some people insisting that Haku have some advanced training for his own protection, but that would be between Naruto and (probably) Kakashi. This is just a VERY poorly disguised attempt to make Naruto into a bloodline limit baby factory and I do not think that falls within his duties as a shinobi.

    Is Itachi still passed out in the woods? I am enjoying the thought of random creatures chewing on his clothes, marking him, or trying to make a nest on/around him. Cannot wait for the next update by the way! Story is awesome.
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  • From DJfrdrck on March 23, 2010
    I LOVE THIS STORY. SO PLEASE KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK AND CONTINUE. REAL SOON
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  • From ANON - Anon on March 23, 2010
    I'm so glad to see this fiction is continuing I really like it....My hope is that the bastard comes to help Naruto with poor little Haku before Itachi has another chance to harm the boy.....I hope you update soon, and thanks for continuing this story
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  • From Tripliss on March 06, 2010
    Oh! Such a good story!!! Hope the next chpater comes out soon! Can't wait!
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  • From Bookworm51485 on January 03, 2010
    I don't have too much reason to come to Aff.net these days, but this story is one BIIIIG reason to keep coming back. I think it's one of my favorite Naruto stories of all-time, definitely one of my favorite mpreg Naruto stories.

    I loved this new chapter. Haku really is an adorable child and I agree with Naruto, it'll be sad to see him lose some of himself to the reality of the world. But I guess that's the reality for all children, some earlier than others.

    Also even though there were some major SasuNaru hints in this chapter, I must admit I'm still holding out, hoping it goes NejiNaru. I really do prefer him to Sasuke and it's nice to see the rare story that doesn't go down the obvious route :-) I'm hoping that we might get to see more NejiNaru interaction in future chapters. Their first kiss was interrupted by word of Haku being kidnapped, though there did seem to be some interest.

    Anyways, I can't wait until your next new chapter. I'm hoping I don't miss it and end of having to dig. *sigh* I really wish Aff.net had a way to notify you of new chapters like ff.net and other sites (nearly ever other site). It would be so much more convenient.
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  • From ANON - Anon on January 02, 2010
    Okay so the last chapter made me feel like openning up a can of Woopass on Sasuke....seriously how can he possibly want to leave the cuteness that is Haku behind?? I just want to jump in the page grab his duck butt looking head and smash it into the nearest hard surface to knock some sense into him...geesh!!! I really hope the bastard realizes that his son needs him to help train him soon...and he needs to come and make his own claim on what belongs to him, if that idiot lets Neji steal Naruto from under him.....well he'll deserve all the hurt that comes his way.

    Poor little Haku I hope Naru tells him the truth about Sasuke soon....he deserves to know the truth about his father...great story...great update....hope you update again soon
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  • From mannahpierce on January 02, 2010
    A very good read. I particularly like the way the POV shifts and the characters' personalities are established. Looking forward to the next chapter.
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  • From EzriCandy on October 30, 2009
    Wow...it was an accident that I happened to stumble upon this story, but I'm really, really glad I did! I love your plot and Haku is just a little sweetheart! I can't wait to see what happens now that Sasuke knows that Naruto is getting married...or what will happen between Gaara, Neji and Sasuke when it comes to the Marriage thing.

    Great job with this! You're doing great!

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  • From serenagold on October 28, 2009
    haha!! ^^ Go Gaara!! (Although as much as I want to root for Gaara, it will never happen. Gaara belongs to Suna and Naruto to Konoha. We all know Naruto's not going to give up his loyalties nor his kids. Better luck next time Gaara.)
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  • From knightkat on October 27, 2009
    I have to wonder what Gaara is thinking, I mean the village will never allow Haku to leave as he contains a Konoha bloodline, and also if Naruto lives in Suna he can never be Hokage. He could potentially be screwing his relationship with Naruto also by demanding him as a 'wife'. I mean great twist, but it really is bad for konoha, Naruto, Haku & Gaara to do this...Besides I like the idea of Neji...
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  • From serenagold on October 02, 2009
    Aww. Sasuke can not resist the lure of Naruto any more.

    Keep up the good work!
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  • From emoboy on October 01, 2009
    PLEASE PLEASE KEEP IT UP i simply love this story. I can't wait for the rest
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  • From Smokebutt on September 21, 2009
    I'm really excited to see where this goes. =]
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  • From on September 08, 2009
    Love this story! It's an intresting twist. I hope its a Neji/Naruto, I don't see many good ones around, and its turning into a very good story. I like a good Sasuke/Naruto story, but it gets overused a lot. But, if it is I'll still read it because its really good. Crossing fingers for a Neji/Naruto though, lol.
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  • From serenagold on September 08, 2009
    Oh my.



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