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By : RayeSesshyFan
  • From animekid on November 16, 2009
    haven't read this in a while; some lazy ass I am

    but actually I haven't had a computer and lo and behold aff.net hentai section gets overrun daily.

    This series is kinda funny/crazy/interesting. I actually find what Sasori does in this amusing as hell (especially the one with everyone catching him on top of Sakura.)

    please tell me there's more with uh.....more experimentation.
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  • From ANON - Sora on July 23, 2009
    An interesting follow-up to the first two. I was a bit confused by the use of "would" throughout the story, though. It felt like you were describing Sakura's daydream - i.e. if Sakura did this, then Sasori would do that. Then Sakura would do... and so on. I think going back and taking out a bunch of those would help tighten up the story. Keep up the good work!
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