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Reviews for Roommates

By : sameyler
  • From flameofthenight on December 10, 2009
    Ok..um..Well it felt like the plot was uber rushed and the ending kind of sprung at you..I was left feeling more than slightly confused.
    I did like the rabid fan girls though.
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  • From tszuke on July 02, 2009
    I loved your story!!!!^^ There arent' enough of these fics around!!!^^ Thank you!!!^^ Oh by the way that fic your looking for is called Angel on my shoulder!!!^^ I loved that story!!!^^ The author was rasha013!!!
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  • From LovelessAngel23 on June 30, 2009
    OMG!!! That was awesome. I really really loved it.. It is so sweet and sexy. Great job..Im going to check out your other works. This story was great and there are not enough Sai/Sasu/Naru fics.. I hope you do more..
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  • From ANON - buntroses13 on June 30, 2009
    OMG! THIS WAS SUCH A CUTE STORY! i love your work! maybe you should do a few more stories about how their lives continue? That would be so cool.
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  • From butterflies1974 on June 29, 2009
    I loved this story. So cute and Sasuke and Sai were very likable and totally sexy. Thank you for a great story.
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  • From ANON - chineseartist on June 29, 2009
    hey, i clicked on your fic and the first thing i noticed was the formatting, which i hated, so i automatically copied the whole thing into word so i could read it without getting too cranky. then i noticed that it was still a bit rough, and then i saw your comment about a beta. since i pretty much did that already, would you like me to email it to you? it was mostly cosmetic changes, punctuation and just a little bit of grammar. i don't have an account here, but i've been reading for over three years. i've got an email for this kind of stuff: wearur@gmail.com. throw me a line if you'd like a brushed up draft of your fic! good job, by the way.
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  • From ANON - Lychee on June 29, 2009
    You might want to re-format your story. As it is now, it's much wider than the screen, meaning you have to scrolllllllll right, then back in order to read it. Which means lots of people (like myself) won't read it. I think you'll get a lot more hits if you fix that little issue. Hope I'll be able to read it soon.
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  • From missbri88 on June 29, 2009
    And it being un-edited wasnt a problem! lol. I read all your stuff unedited cuz Im your beta, silly!
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  • From missbri88 on June 29, 2009
    AHHHH!! *squealing like the fangirl I am while doing a happy dance* I love it!!! Its so awesome! The smut! The mild fluff! Perfect!!! ^^ THANK YOU THANK YOU THANK YOU THANK YOU THANK YOU THANK YOU THANK YOU!!! *getting teary-eyed* I love you!
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  • From on June 29, 2009
    Damn!! That was hot!
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