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By : Jelp
  • From CianisDeRolionus on August 18, 2009
    Wow this is particularly amazing so far. And thats really saying something since all of your works are amazing. I would very much like to see how this story advances. Please update soon!!! I'll be waiting with baited breath.

    ~Cianis
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  • From LadyLaran on August 17, 2009
    *giggles* Ok, this is off to a great start.
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  • From ANON - SamuraiSaaya on August 17, 2009
    Haha! Definitely enjoyed these first two chapters. Naruto's greeting for Sasuke was absolutely priceless!

    And I do so love art-centered fanfics.

    Please update soon! ^^
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  • From Tamara on August 17, 2009
    Itachi is very clever. Everyone and thing has their uses especially Sasuke and his closet issue.
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  • From Aryia123 on June 27, 2009
    Oh dear lord, I swear I was giggling SO much through this. I knew what was going to happen before it happened. xD

    I wondered what 'mistake' Naruto was going to make, I had no idea it'd be this funny!

    I so can't wait for the next chapter. Haha, I'm still laughing about it now.
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  • From Nyuchan on June 26, 2009
    Normally I'm not emotionally affected by stories, but in this story I can't help but to be embarrassed for Naruto. *lol*
    Poor Sasuke getting his hopes up for being finally acknowledged by his brother.
    Well I'm waiting for the next chapters, I've a feeling that'll be a good story. ;-)
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  • From hieisdragoness18 on June 26, 2009
    lmao! man that's funny! i wanna read the next so bad now
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  • From butterflies1974 on June 26, 2009
    Can't wait for more. this Story is really different and I look forward to the next chapter.
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  • From ANON - kinkou on June 25, 2009
    MWAHAHAHAHAHHAA!!!!!! *dies laughing* Oh! That was just GREAT! The PERFECT Uzumaki introduction! hehehehehehehee..... *wiping tears* I can't wait to see what happens next. *snicker-snicker* PLease update soon.
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  • From ANON - qwerty on June 25, 2009
    hahaha, great first chapter
    keep going!
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  • From ANON - curtainsfall on June 25, 2009
    It's slightly disappointing to see you go from "Afraid of the Dark," where it seemed like you had everything sorted out in your head and the work was proofread, to "While Naruto had never met Gaara's older brother, Kankuro, he knew that Kiba and Kankuro were good friends, even though Naruto had never met him." It almost seems like you're a different writer. I'm not sure whether it's just my style of reading, but there are some points where there is too much information given at a specific time, such as the characters' emotions or their perspectives. It kind of takes away from their mysterious sides when the POV jumps from person to person. The first chapter hasn't really revealed how the story will be, but I've liked your work so far, so I'll look out for the next chapter. I apologize if you're offended, but I hope to point out these things as a reader for you as a writer to see.
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