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Reviews for Never Perfect

By : Darksidedown
  • From ANON - Purvy Sage on June 23, 2009
    Wow, this is really great!
    I saw some typoes here and there... like charka instead of chakra... but those little things paled in comparison to this FANTASTIC storyline!
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  • From ANON - deathsangel666 on June 22, 2009
    omg...i cant wait for an update. and trust me when i say that me actually taking the time to write a review is astounding. i read thousands of stories but yours has me hooked. please please continue. i cant wait to see where narutos animal instincts take them next. i would like to advise one thing though, if you wish to continue the pretence of him being animal like dont try to rush through the story to make him all better alot of authors do that so that they can move on with the romance and what not. your doing great so i dont think that will be a problem. keep up the great work and update update update.
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  • From Nanin on June 21, 2009
    I'm addicted.
    The story so far has captured me.
    Feed the addiction, please?
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  • From Shikubokubo on June 20, 2009
    When I first saw this story posted I said to myself "I will not read that story, it has spoilers". And yet I find myself reading it every time you update. I especially like the part with Naruto asserting his dominance over Sasuke and marking him, good job on that.

    By the way, I hate you for not fixing Naruto's eye, which I guess in a way is a compliment. Please fix his eye :(

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  • From ANON - animelover on June 20, 2009
    yep, definitely hot! dang, can't you make sakura disappear ... like sasuke using some jutsu to knock her out or something? LOL! ;-) just kidding ... kinda!

    you don't disappoint kiddo ... and i'll be lurking to watch for the next chappie. doesn't even have to include a lemon or nothing. lime anyone?
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  • From ZeroZoey on June 20, 2009
    Great chapter, I am really enjoying this story. I hope Naruto will regenerate his eye and bad side of his body. Well keep up the great work and update soon.
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  • From blugirlami21 on June 20, 2009
    I really like this story, sorry if I haven't commented to before but I was waiting to see where you were going with this. Love, love the connection that Sasuke and Naruto share in this, it was sort of like a parental figure that I saw between the two of them at first, kind of like imprinting that occurs with certain species. Sasuke can get through to Naruto like no one else has or probably ever will after the trauma Naruto has now experienced. The display of dominance that Naruto performed on Sasuke was delicious, if that's the right word for it. I don't know how much further things would have gone had Sakura not been a unwitting or should I say willing witness to it and maybe that's kind of the point. She's a great measure for just how much Sasuke and Naruto have going on between the two of them. She wondered if she was next but judging by how easily Naruto ignored her after wards, I don't see that happening anytime soon. It was nice to hear Sasuke admit that he's wanted Naruto all along, it's sad that Naruto was secondary to everything else and it will be interesting to see what his place is in the future when everything that Sasuke put first is thrown into view again. Your writing flow is good, no obvious misspellings, some of the sentences didn't make since like: "He won’t Naruto to be pulling." Great chapter. really great story, can't wait to read what happens next.
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  • From ANON - Satsuki on June 19, 2009
    Hello. I have read what you have already written I think it's wonderful story. I would like to be informed when you have updated this story. Hope to hear from you soon.
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  • From ANON - Ivy on June 19, 2009
    Wow this chapter was amazing! Love the interaction between Sasuke and Sakura. It was sweet that his 1st word was teme ;-) The story is very compelling and definitely something unique compared to other fics. Can't wait for the next chapter!
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  • From serenagold on June 19, 2009
    Dominate Naruto = YES!!! Ha! You just made my day. =^^=

    Keep up the great work!
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  • From ANON - a kitsunes light on June 19, 2009
    Sakura joined them? strange I never saw that one coming, but it's cool anyway, it just means you continue to surprise us! ahah And I wonder if sasuke willsoon tell her clearly that she will NOT get near naru in that way, eheh.
    ALso I loved the fact that naru can at least understand somewhat! And I loved the fact that teme was hs "first" word!
    I can't wait to read more!!!!! Thanks for writing!
    Also, I LOVED that drawing! thanks waffles! I loved it! ANd it made more curius about the eye!!!!
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  • From ANON - a kitsunes light on June 18, 2009
    Wow! I can't wait to read more!
    There's not much else for me to say, I just wanna find out more now!
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  • From DevilnBlue on June 17, 2009
    This was a very interesting story. I was a bit skeptical at first, I must admit, but you managed to draw me into the story. I especially love the scene when Sasuke enters Naruto's mind only to discover the real condition that Naruto is in. I could really picture it. And my heart strings really tugged when I saw what Naruto has been reduced to.

    Don't you want to smack, Ino sometimes? I mean god, sweetie don't you know he can rip your head off. But oh now Naruto has fox ears. And Sasuke, about damn time really, is finally going to take responsibility for Naruto. Lol he's the fox whisperer.

    Oh, oh I found your Kakashi really in character and I really am looking forward to what is going to happen next. Sorry this isn't much of a review but yeah, you definetely caught my attention.

    Will e-mail you as well. So ttyl ^^;
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  • From ANON - animelover on June 17, 2009
    breathtaking! i'm still in awe of this story after reading it three times, and can't stop shaking.....literally! that is just so intense, espcially how naru will only respond to sasu even at a rudimentary level.

    let the bloodbath begin! danzo needs to be put down .... painfully and slowly. *evil snicker*

    good work!
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  • From on June 17, 2009
    This story is sooooo awesome!!! I´m so totally hooked on it! I like your fast updating and it doesnt matter how short the chapters are they are awesome as they are^^

    I hope you will keep up the good work and I cant wait what will happen, I will watch out when you update again(told you totally hooked up :D)
    many hugs BumbleBee
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