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Reviews for Never Perfect

By : Darksidedown
  • From Shikubokubo on June 26, 2009
    That's so sad about his eye... I just hope Kyuubi can heal it once Madara is gone for good. Any chance you're gonna kill Sakura off? (Please say yes... the world needs more Sakura deaths!)
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  • From solitare1 on June 26, 2009
    You have created a fantastic story here. Absolutely love it!! Great Job!!
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  • From ANON - deathsangel666 on June 26, 2009
    a masterpiece once again better than the last chapter i might say. you simply amaze me every time. cant wait for more. ahh you send shivers down my spine reading this. update soon, you cant keep us waiting for long.
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  • From ANON - Purvy Sage on June 26, 2009
    Wow!

    3 real tails!

    This is really intriguing. I'm excited to one day learn more about that connection and why three and not one or nine or something.

    Naruto must have been so fearful to take his own eye... so sad.

    Por Naru-Kyubbi-chan!!!!! *waaaaah*
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  • From ANON - Ivy on June 25, 2009
    Epic fight scene! Why does Naruto have 3 tails? Can't wait for what comes next ;-)
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  • From DevilnBlue on June 24, 2009
    Aaaww I can feel the tension, it's so exhilarting. Wierd I know. But I really like this story like I said last time... or I think I said this last time. It's sad that Naruto has been reduced to this but I'm glad that he's beginning to heal a bit physically if not mentally. I must admit I'm just as curious to figure out how he got that scar over his eye but I'm willing to wait.

    So hopefully they make it to sound without a hitch. And it'd be terribly interesting in they somehow ran into Kabuto. Have you seen him lately. Creepy much. =/ Well bye^^
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  • From Nanin on June 23, 2009
    I'm glad to see a new chapter already.
    I see that both Naruto and Sasuke are growing quite a bit together.
    Picking up pieces and what not.
    But his eye...now that's something I'm ready to know about.
    Until then~

    A story druggie with a smile.
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  • From Shikubokubo on June 23, 2009
    Finally, SMUT! And I gotta say, the dominant Naruto is just so perfect for this fic. I'm actually more of a SasuNaru fan but I am absolutely loving this so far. Hoping to see some more growth from Naruto in the near future... if you catch my drift ^^
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  • From blugirlami21 on June 23, 2009
    Well that's alright, no one is perfect. This was a good chapter as well, we got some more growing from Naruto and we got some smut as well. I loved Sasuke's fantasy, it would be nice if Naruto could just go back to how he used to be but it's probably just not going to happen that way. I hope he recovers enough to have just a bit of the sunny attitude he once had. So this is a NaruSasu, I like that Naruto initiated the mornings activities and also in Sasuke's fantasy that Naruto was the doer. I don't think it would be right for Naruto be bottom in this story, not right now anyway. If you really need a Beta, I could proofread and I've read a lot of good romances SasuNaru and otherwise and I've been told I give good story advice, so just let me know.
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  • From ANON - Purvy Sage on June 23, 2009
    I am loving this!

    I'm happy to see that Sakura isn't as whiney and self-serving as sh appeared to be in the first chapters. Afterall... I am sure she has grown as
    uch as Sasuke and Naruto have.

    Sexy make out session! Really pulled on the old heartstrings.

    ...and the symbolic beam of light with Sasuke as the savior... and Naruto the beast in the shadows. Nicely done. :-)

    Please let me know when you update next! :-)
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  • From ANON - Telpei on June 23, 2009
    Beta, you say? ^_^ What can I say, you've got me hooked on this story... if you're still looking for a beta I'd be happy to help out! You can email me at setoassassinplushie_tm@yahoo.ca
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  • From ANON - Ivy on June 23, 2009
    I like that team 7 can somehow come together and heal. The part about Naruto being in the shadows and Sasuke seeing a twisted mirror of himself was so beautifully written! I also like Sasuke's thoughts about Naruto having little Uchiha babies ;-) Also, wondering what happened to Naruto's eye and how he is going to deal with everything that happened to him. You do a good job writing Sakura and you make her tough and not so whiny... when some people just bash her in fics so thats refreshing. Hope you update soon!
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  • From ANON - animelover on June 23, 2009
    aw gee, a bit of action ... just for me? you're definitely on my Christmas list now sweetums. lol!!!

    so is saku gonna get a clue and give her boys their love time? ooooo, could they ditch her somewhere? lol! i don't hate her, but dang she's in the way. ;-) ok, nuff whining. anyway, i'd be curious to see if leaf tries to hunt them down.

    keep up the good work kiddo! YOU ROCK!
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  • From ANON - deathsangel666 on June 23, 2009
    Great work once again. had me leaning into my computer to find out what happens next. and i cant wait for the eye thing to be explained, the mystery is great with his interaction between sasuke and sakura. cant wait for another update.
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  • From ANON - softwelshrain on June 23, 2009
    I can beta for you if you wish - I'm listed on the authors' resources forum under softwelshrain if you want to check me out. I can give you an updated list of other authors I'm currently working with so you can check the work out - email me!
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