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Reviews for Learning A New Jutsu

By : VadMustang
  • From VadMustang on December 14, 2010
    THX to everyone!! im so glad you like it!!! and yeah, english is not my first language and im still learning it so i have a lots of errors, but im glad you liked it anyways!! hahaha i know its a bloodline jutsu but for the sake of the smut it can be learnned XD.... thx to everyone again!!
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  • From ShadowWalker236 on July 10, 2009
    honestly a really good story lol one problem o.o the jutsu that you had naruto use was a bloodline jutsu only for nara's lol =D otherwise absolutely great
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  • From sonykit on June 11, 2009
    hey, there! that wasn't too bad for a first. you might want to consider using a beta though as there are grammar/spelling errors here and there. loved narutos's shy aggressiveness and sasuke's deceptive passiveness. you pay a lot of attention to detail so that's a plus.
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  • From Kiotana on June 10, 2009
    Hahahahaha! Wonderful!
    There should be more useful jutsu's like Shikamaru's XD
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