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Reviews for Whosoever doth Awaken the Demon

By : vanessaclarke
  • From ANON - Anon on October 31, 2014
    I really like this and wish you would continue!
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  • From FuraMara on March 29, 2012
    this is so good i can't wait to see more and *hem* please don't be offended by me saying this but this story seems like it couls easily have Mpreg in it. anyway love the story and can't wait for so more
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  • From ANON - BLACKMAGIC101 on January 18, 2011
    Aw great chapter! Oh and so glad your back!!
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  • From ANON - Okami_no_Kage on August 25, 2010
    This is story is fantastic I love that fact that you haven't turned Naruto into a damsal in distress, it really irritates me because I love the fairy tale type stories with these characters but it's so difficult to find one where Naruto isn't turned into a whimpering mess. Please update this soon I can't wait to know what happens next. I also love Kiba in this story he is a great character and I hope to seen more of him. The moments he has with Naruto is good because it builds Naruto's trust.

    Anyway Best Wishes and Great Work. Okami_no_Kage.
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  • From dutsada on March 22, 2010
    I LOVE YOUR STORY!!!!
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  • From teasetillyoudrop on March 19, 2010
    Love the natural flow of this fanfic. And even though I've read so many medieval-like fanfics, yours is so well thought out and very fun. The characters are very IC and I couldn't help but smile every time Sasuke pissed off Naruto.

    Can't wait for the next chapter. :)
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  • From ANON - Ivy on March 18, 2010
    Great writing of the interaction scences! Your story has many layers to the plot. Awesome chapter ^_^
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  • From ANON - Anon on March 18, 2010
    Love the story.
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  • From serenagold on March 17, 2010
    Wow. I remember this story from, like, forever ago. I like where you've gone with it!!!

    Keep up the great work!
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  • From ANON - Anon on March 16, 2010
    I am truly enjoying this fiction...I was wondering if you have posted it on ygal?? Please do if you have not done so yet....I know that many readers there would appreciate something as entertaining as this fiction!!! I love your Naruto he is so well composed and does not come across as many other whinny pouty Naruto's out there...and your Sasuke is such a sweetly possesive bastard....please do update soon and thank you for sharing your talent with us.
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  • From Sheemashelin on March 16, 2010
    I gladly await the next chapter, in not a bit impatiantly. ^^ I enojy the way you have presented the plot line, it flows and moves quickly, but not in an agrivating way. I do hope that the next part comes soon. I'm interested to see what Naruto can do and see the two get together. THe story has delightful humor that is fitting and true to the characters. You're doing a splendid job.

    now for a fan gorl moment....

    WHOOOT!!!!!! Bring on the next chapter baby!!! Bwahahaha! I loves it very very much! XDDD

    Okay on with the normal...

    Thank you for sharing this wonderful idea. ^^

    ~Zimm
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  • From littletoshiro on March 15, 2010
    That picture was too cute. I love the idea of a fluffy-tailed Naruto.
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  • From ANON - rifter on March 15, 2010
    Yay! I love this story! I'm so happy you're posting again. ^_^ I especially liked Naruto's demon act. Now I can't wait for the part where he kicks everyone's ass. If Sasuke was surprised by a little growling, I'd love to see his reaction when Naru shows his true power. Keep it coming!
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  • From SoSickOfNyQuil on March 15, 2010
    LoL the whole time Naruto was acting all vicious and whatnot I envisioned that he would be like the seductive and calm, yet cold and violent killers like draculas wives or the queen of the damned LoL. (probably wrong to think of him that way since he's a boy but when you started describing how he was circling him and his mannerisms that was what instantly came to mind LoL) Geez Naruto is a prince Sasuke, stop disrespecting his heritage =P jerk! And get over yourself you know you want him haha
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  • From ZeroZoey on June 18, 2009
    This is a really great story, just reading the summary I was not sure if I would like it or not but I really did enjoy it. Keep up the great work.
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