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Reviews for Naoko's Story

By : ArianLockheart
  • From questruler on October 01, 2009
    the story is ok and easy to follow but you should clear up what the fourth did (kyuubi seal and jutsu used for the temrary sex change)
    since naruto is really naoko have her paired with kiba, shino, or an OC after she has to reveal her sercret (when naruto attacks orochimaru during the chunin exams, five prong seal disrupts naokos disgiuse jutsu thingy and sakura finds out, then sasuke, and the other rookie nine and neji's team) i look forward to you continuing this story
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  • From ShyTanith on June 16, 2009
    The stories fine, well once you realise that Naoko is Naruto and visa-versa. As or yuri and youi, it's completely up to you, this is your story not your friends' so write it as you see fit. With Naruto/Naoko suddenly becoming female from time to time you have the potential for both yuri and youi as well as het relations. Given that Naoko has been raped previously, she could find it emotionally traumatic to be intimate with someone. As such I would suggest that whoever you pair her with, loves her for who she is as a person and not her appearance - that person would also have to accept her history, maybe not straight away but eventually. Might I also suggest that you make reference as to where Minato-chan is staying as id Naoko has just turned 16 he will be 3 (taking into account that Naoko was 12 when she was raped and would have been nearly 13 giving birth) and is unlikely to just vanish without an explination.
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