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Reviews for Just for Us

By : inuspike
  • From mykonosparadise on January 29, 2010
    Love all the one-shots, especially No. 6! (Sai is the seme there) :)
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  • From Animehedonist on October 26, 2009
    I'm going to read the Halloween chapter but I had completely forgotten until now about my review mentioning certain things and well the first word that occurs to me is yum. And thank you so much! Ino, then Anko and Ibiki each gave me a bigger and bigger grin.

    The Halloween chapter made me give a sad smile because I think Sai would protect Naruto like that. Everyone felt in character Sakura didn't feel overblown in her unintentional hurting of Naruto. It was just a misunderstanding and not catching onto what was going on with Naruto on Sakura's part. Which Sai points out (am I sensing manga canon mirroring there? 'cause if so I love it)

    I look forward to the next chapter Sai and Naruto roleplaying sounds like it could be very interesting.

    This one is just a little detail or something you could put in somewhere... how is it that sai stays so clean when he uses ink? That stuff gets everywhere. My guess is he showers a lot and lead that wherever you want that to go.
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  • From NarutoVixin on October 22, 2009
    nice tho i would love to know what little miss cherry blossom has to say after she finds out why he wouldnt come to her party IF anyone tells her that is
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  • From Paradox13 on October 22, 2009
    Somehow I missed an update. I will put a link to your story on my rec list so that won't happen again.

    Canvas was great. Divine lubrication -something every slash story needs.

    Halloween was more beat up on Sakura than NaruSai, but that's okay they did a lot of sweet snuggling.

    As for a suggestion I will give it serious thought and let you know if I come up with anything unique.
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  • From ANON - Anon on October 22, 2009
    Awe! Sai is such a good boyfriend, protecting Naruto from evil Sakura. The warm, cute fluff more then made up for the fact that there was no smut. I can't wait until your next update!
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  • From Paradox13 on September 16, 2009
    That was amazing. I have enjoyed all your chapters, but this has been the best by far. I especially enjoyed it because there was Sasuke, and Naruto wasn't mooning/pining/or otherwise obbsessing over him. Your Sakura was spot on, I can't stand her.

    As far as who should be top, I have always loved Naruto under Sai. I am voting "Sai for Top!"

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  • From butterflies1974 on September 16, 2009
    Oh gosh that was the sweetest story! Thank you for it and I look forward to more.
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  • From LadyLaran on September 16, 2009
    This one was so sweet! My heart melted at the end. They really do fit well together, don't they?
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  • From Animehedonist on August 15, 2009
    Sai as seme would be lovely ^^ I'd think they'd usually default to Naruto topping but I'd think if Sai was inspired he'd take to topping on occasion. (Say if he was inspired by certain kinks I'm sure he'd be allll over. Such as edible body paint or simply painting on Naruto, or perhaps shibari done in such a way it would display his lovers body the best he'd be all over that, spoken as a Sai rper >.>)

    I like how you have the pairing set up and this is just tasty. I like the random mention earlier of how Sai smells. It's one of my favourite things to see how people think certain characters smell and Ink and Parchment is a nice one.
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  • From ANON - Anon on August 14, 2009
    I love each and every one of your one-shots, and I think Sai as the seme would be so hot. I can't wait to read your next one-shot. Ja Ne!
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  • From ANON - Paradox13 on June 22, 2009
    Those were awesome. I love Naruto and Sai, sadly there doesn't seem to be alot of it out there, so I am very glad I found yours.
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  • From butterflies1974 on May 30, 2009
    I liked this one just as well as the last story. I liked how you stated that Naruto could loose control with Sai. I hope that you do a one-shot on more of that little tib bit. Thank you for another great one-shot can't wait to read more.
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  • From ANON - Anon on May 29, 2009
    Good work! It's always nice to see this couple.

    (I don't think it was on purpose, but the 'Reveiw Just For Us' button-link thing at the bottom, along with your comments had me giggling for a few.)
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  • From butterflies1974 on May 28, 2009
    I liked this story...Not enough Sai and Naruto stories in my point of view at least. Thank you for a cute story...Hope to see more of the infamous couple.
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