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Reviews for A small crack in perfection

By : eternalshiva
  • From Akako on September 28, 2009
    Ahh! Fantastic!! XD I don't usually read AU's, since I'm completely obsessed with the whole 'ninja' thing, but this fic's got me hooked! I'm a sucker for NaruHina, so that helps... but what helps even more, is the obvious writing talent you've got there. I love all the little puns (I only caught a few from chapter 4) that relate to the canon story. There's a lot of really awesome sense-activating going on, too. ;P Plus, the perfect balance of humor and angst, and realism. Just... seriously amazing. Keep it up!

    *eagerly awaiting the next chapter*
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  • From ANON - Anon on August 02, 2009
    -rolls across floor- omg ogm mgo~! O_o I want moooooooooooooooooooooore~!
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  • From shadowkeepre on July 30, 2009
    Wanted to mention that I'm very impressed with how you handled the grief and dealing with regret and guilt.

    Keep it up!

    - shadow
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  • From statnin on July 28, 2009
    Aha Luv it!
    cant wait for the nxt one
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  • From ANON - seth on July 28, 2009
    love your story. i really like how it's flowing. though i wouldn't worry about how ooc hinata is for your story's virson of her. after all coudring what she's dealing with if she wasn't a bit emoshional then it be unrealistic
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  • From serenagold on July 27, 2009
    I'm not going to comment on the emotional stuff, which anyone would argue was well written.. however I will rejoice in the scene where Naruto steals Hinata's chair!!! Of all the things!! Absurdly funny and pure Naruto at its best!

    Keep up the great work!
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  • From serenagold on July 14, 2009
    haha.. loved the chapter! Naruto and Hinata are always so cute together.
    Keep up the great work!
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  • From Shen on July 10, 2009
    This is such an interesting story... I can not wait for the next update... do update as soon as you can..

    Ja.
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  • From serenagold on June 30, 2009
    People are idiots. Tomatoes are fruits. I'm American and I support this statement.

    lol I love it when Naruto goes into Ramen shock. ^^ Too damn adorable.
    Hinata and Naruto are always such an adorable couple. :D
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  • From wharehouse on June 21, 2009
    Good chapter, fun reactions :P I look forward to your future chapters
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  • From statnin on June 21, 2009
    Love it
    Its addictive
    update soon
    Leaf
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  • From ANON - hzleys87 on June 16, 2009
    I love the story so far. It's compelling and lovely, and I do hope you'll keep updating it.
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  • From ANON - Harmony on June 12, 2009
    omg I love this.... @_@ look forward to when you will get back to it... and I'm hoping it is not too terribly long... ^^ good luck with your writers block.
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  • From Perpetual159 on May 30, 2009
    Cliché...? Perhaps...

    Interesting...? Absolutely! ^_^
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  • From wharehouse on May 27, 2009
    Entertaining and innovative, keep it up!
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