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Reviews for A small crack in perfection

By : eternalshiva
  • From ANON - nata on October 22, 2010
    cant wait!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! wens the next update the next chappie is gonna b a fireworks of orgasms huh
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  • From Darklordlight on October 11, 2010
    Let me put it this way.
    Darklordlight COMMANDS YOU TO UPDATE...... please... (pouts) im so stinkin hooked on it. You're just too good of a writer for my own good.
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  • From Darklordlight on October 11, 2010
    Please write more... I'm stuck between this one and "Feral Dreams" and you're the only one who has updated recently.
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  • From statnin on October 09, 2010
    next chapter. Next Chapter. NEXT CHAPTER!!!
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  • From ANON - Mal-com on July 30, 2010
    Really amazing story! Good work!
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  • From ANON - -*- on July 29, 2010
    A very good read for an AU
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  • From Darklordlight on April 17, 2010
    :L~~ MMMMOOOORRRREEEEE.......... (said zombie like)
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  • From Darklordlight on April 17, 2010
    @__@ I literally yank my eyes off the screen irises burning. :L~ (Drooling)
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  • From statnin on March 01, 2010
    Alright! Good show Good Show. Now its gettin steamy, dont make us wait now ;)
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  • From serenagold on February 22, 2010
    The moral of this chapter is that the most valuable friendships you can have are those with questionable shady pasts and various illegal skills that might benefit you if someone ever tries to fuck with you or yours. lol

    Also, Naruto and Hinata... OMG so freaking hot. Great GREAT scene.
    Keep up the excellent work.
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  • From ANON - jd on February 08, 2010
    please continue and hurry and update please!!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From statnin on January 06, 2010
    This is awesome ;)
    Hope you hit us with the next update already
    Leaf > Out
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  • From ANON - Wayward Ryu on December 25, 2009
    Wow...just...wow...I don't think I've ever read a work of fan fiction this good. I'm being dead serious. Usually I don't review fan fictions, but this one was so good, I had to let my thoughts be heard. The sentence structure is spot on, and the wording is very well chosen. Even for an AU fan fic, I can see you took measures to not completely rape the characters, unless it was for the sake of actually keeping in tune with the story and not because of laziness or a lack of research. I think the scenes involving Kiba are my favorites, mostly because it's the humor is needed to help break all the seriousness, and it isn't just shoved down my throat like a bad comedy. I also love how Naruto and Sakura interact, constantly bouncing off each other in their little not-sibling rivalry. All -in-all I great work I can't wait to finish, keep up the great stuff, and I'll definitely get to reading your other works as well, seeing as how you're now my new favorite author.
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  • From shadowkeepre on October 04, 2009
    Loving the flowers, and I totally agree about roses (for the most part).
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  • From Keishidu on September 29, 2009
    Well first of all let me say that I am glad that you are not dead i was really starting to wonder there. Second Great story so far You've really got me hooked into the story so far even though I'm not a real big fan of the AU stories. Keep it up.
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