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From arabuzumaki on June 23, 2009
is that love in oro's tone. i'm so happy for him. this experience will really heal some of both their wounds.
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From butterflies1974 on June 23, 2009
I like how you are making Oorchimaru a victim also and the Itachi thing is also brilliant. And poor Kakashi...
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From Achillona77 on June 19, 2009
the only way tsunade would ever release the jutsu is if she's threatened by a person in a more powerful position... and that only leaves one person...Oro. he has the upperhand~for the moment~ and she wouldn't dare refuse him.

I see Ibiki does have a point ... 'Kashi may not want to come back. EVER. except in a revenge capacity... he had family he never knew... and it's probably killing him... jiji shold have said something to the hokage... now he's gonna get the beatdown of his life.

there are so many shocking revelations, that one wonders, is there anything left to be revealed? Can't hate the snake sanin too much, his sensei has a lot to answer for [may he burn in hell forever!]... and so do jiji and tsunade...

kashi didn't choose his circumstance, but now his self-esteem, self worth and confidence have taken a nose dive....

for the moment, though, he probably is where he wants to be....

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From Raholea on June 19, 2009
.......

You cliffed it right there!! Shame!!!

*coughs* sorry
i have been following this story from the very beginning in my spare time- which isn't much, and i haven't reviewed due to that time restriction. but for the moment, i have the time... and i will make full use of it.

first, as much as cliffhangers annoy me, i do love the anticipation build and can hardly blame you. so while i may rant, don't take it personal, it's just me.
Second, i'm finding the plot really interesting. You're putting nearly the whole (adult) cast of Naruto into a different persona, and sticking to it. it really intrigues me when a writer can do that successfully. Also, as much as the initial thought of Ibiki with ANYone squicked me, i have warmed up to the occasional Ibiki story, and i really do hope him and Kakashi can get together in this one. i think Kakashi needs that strong person in his life, and Ibiki needs someone he can take care of, away from his work duties.

my only real complaint here is that you don't always scene break between what's happening in one place and another, and even just a slight indication would really help. even if it's just a couple *** and a space or two, would help. sometimes my mind has to scramble from trying to jump to (for example from last chapter) the last comment made by Tsunade, to the scene with Iruka and Ibiki. *shrugs* just a notice. do as you like.

Keep up the good work and i'm looking forward to more reviews!!!!
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From arabuzumaki on June 17, 2009
wow i'm not sure what i should expect from this fic anymore. the story line is so great!!! usually one should side with the good guys, but oro has such a sad past and i want him to get this loving experience. then again ibiki has strong feelings for kashi, iru and gen want ibiki.

CAN THIS PLOT GET THICKER?!! lol
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From shadoerunner on June 16, 2009
Good night

I have been following this story for a while, it is great. It is well written slash, that actually has a plot and character development. in my humble opinion to many slash fanfic, focus on meaningless sex.

I must say that chapter 18 was a welcome surprise. It has always been my belief that the Third raped or did abused him some how for him to turn completely to the dark side. I mean being turned down for leader does not seem to me to be enough reason to try and wipe the villiage off the face of the earth.

My only hope is that the snake sanin is not playing Kakashi, he seem so real when he asked him not to hurt him or when he saw Kakashi cock and almost ran. I wonder if Tsuanade will be getting the welcoming that she is expecting. Who knows maybe she is the one that made the Third decide to use him for his sexual pleasure. But I am glad that Kakashi did not abuse the power of a seme and I am glad that My snake Sanin had a night of pleasure with no pain, maybe in time pain can be introduced.

While I hope that the Snake sanin does not go after Iruka, I do hope that Kakashi can have a slow but steady influence on him. No rapid changes, just maybe the path less cruel, and I hope Kakashi does not betray him, unless Oru plans on betraying him.

I think it might be a great threesome, after all Ibiki is tired of his current job. Maybe, him and Kakashi can become diplomats to sound.

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From BelladonnaLaMorte on June 16, 2009
Again, this pairing still squicks me - even more so now that you've added in Orochimaru and Kabuto (plus I'm a Kakairu girl through and through) but I still maintain that this is a very well-written story and a highly unusual one at that. The relationship foundations you've given Ibiki and Kakashi are very strong and I'm interested to see where you take this. I loved the interaction between Ibiki and Tsunade - her assumptions that Jiraiya or Hiashi had been made Hokage as her replacement. Oooh, the two things that I definitely loved - Kakashi's still being manipulative and the fact that Iruka is Hokage, and a very kinky Hokage at that!!! Belle
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From Achillona77 on June 16, 2009
SHOCKING! BIZARRE! but oh so appropriate!

But master,� Kabuto began angrily, �you promised he�d be mine.�

�And he was . . .� Orochimaru hissed threateningly, �Was being the operative word. Now he�s mine.�
[lmao!]

kashi was thinking! a position of power... no matter how strange the situation, is a good thing. now kabuto can't touch him!

~the snake's a uke! [or was he just playing kashi?]~

ibiki won't be happy, but he'll understand!
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From arabuzumaki on June 16, 2009
omg kashi/oro was amazing. i never would have thought oro to be that submissive, it was really different. it's nice that kashi showed him a good time, they can sort of heal each other i guess.
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From arabuzumaki on June 07, 2009
lol iruka has certainly been a closet perv lol.
i really like the paths you choose for your ibiki/kakashi fics. it makes the happy endings so well deserved ^_^
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From butterflies1974 on May 31, 2009
I love that couple...Kakashi and Ibiki. And you are making them so...well I really like the fact that two men so hurt and scared are getting a chance to be together. Thank you for another fine chapter and I can't wiat to read more.
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From butterflies1974 on May 31, 2009
I really hope that Kakashi gets to have revenge on that woman and also a great relationship with Ibiki. Thank you for another great chapter can't wait to read more.
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From Achillona77 on May 28, 2009
fascinating!

the relationship between kashi and ibiki is starting out on a solid foundation... as for the new hokage... mrrrrr...

i'm afraid that kashi may be spirited away before he and ibiki get together... woe to whoever grabs him...because ibiki just said he'd kill anyone who touches kashi...

wonder who he kills first?

love it! love it! love it! anxously awaiting the next installment..

~anz~
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From Googledi on May 28, 2009
I love this! Kakashi is ust the most adorable little uke ever! But it hurts a kakashi-fangirl like me too see him hurt, but he is now with Ibiki and that is all that matters! I'm not too keen on the Iruka bits though, it would've been better if you left him out the story...but it's still a great fanfiction and your writing never ceases to amaze me!
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From polaris on May 28, 2009
more,more,MORE!
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