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Reviews for A New Begining...Let's hope I dont screw it up!

By : SmittnKittn
  • From arabuzumaki on May 11, 2009
    i can't wait to see what happens tomorrow ^.^ i like that family though kind of strange group though but hey they are all coll. i know kiba and naru are gonna get along just fine ^.^
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  • From tawanawelch on May 11, 2009
    Aww, that was a good first night. He was welcomed to the new family with open arms, well at least from 2 of his new siblings.LOL Im like Naruto, i cant wait to see what happens tomorrow. Unlike him i bet he gets soaked. hehehe I like ur descriptions of everything they didnt suck to me.:)
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  • From tawanawelch on May 08, 2009
    Aww, i think its shaped up to be a pretty great story and i look forward to who else is in Foster care with Iruka. This chapter made me cry a little cuz of Naruto's situation and his apprehension. I know I'm gonna
    love this one. Can't wait for the next chapter.:D

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  • From trystkinkou on May 08, 2009
    Hmmm.. interesting. The beginning is so like sweetangel18's in 'Finally Loved' that make me wonder if she is an insperation for this story. It's different enough but points much the same way. I can't wait to see how you take this sort of "spin" But be careful, the idea right now is close enough to be thought of as plagerism.
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  • From Mija on May 08, 2009
    wow very short chapter, not to much to go on, except that people keep kicking Naruto out and hes going to anew home with Umino which I asssume is Iruka??? it seems interesting, again the chapter was short so it would of been nice to have a bit more detail or plot in it but over all it was a great start and I look foward to more, ty for the read, huggles and smiles Mija...:-)
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