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Reviews for The Art of Patience

By : yolotengo
  • From butterflies1974 on June 27, 2009
    I love your story. It is brilliant. Can't wait for the outfit chapter and then the party.
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  • From ANON - qwerty on June 20, 2009
    Great chapter! Can't wait for the party!
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  • From ANON - Hanami on June 16, 2009
    Hooray, okay. I feel a little less like crying for Sasuke now, at least XD. Which is good.

    But Madara... is bad XD. And now I'm super terribly curious as to why Sasuke's such a pain slut o_o. I can't figure out if he just got pain and pleasure mixed up early on or if he hates himself and has major self issues or if he's just a simple plain masochist no explanation XD.

    I'm also curious of how big of an age gap exists still between Itachi and Sasuke and Naruto. Sasuke seems a lot younger than both of them. Maybe because of his.... impatience? But I'm just curious.
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  • From ANON - Hanami on June 16, 2009
    I don't know why, but I just feel too miserable for Sasuke in this XD. I know what being second best is, and being it in love (or everything, for that matter) has to suck. Terribly. XD It was almost enough to make me cry, really, even if he's a bad sub. I am frustrated/sad/unhappy on his behalf.

    And yet at the same time, I'm the sort of person to hope that he goes/leaves... either to find someone whom he doesn't have to compete with a perfect brother with or.... or wind up sad in the streets/alone....then I'll cry about it and shake my fists ._.;. Because really, I can't see how this can possibly get better for Sasuke. He almost seems to be hated or maybe just barely tolerated (and I can't even say tolerated for Itachi's sake. XD Maybe I missed it, but I didn't get the feeling he could give a flying flip), and Itachi is just better than him so... he's still second place e_e. Hurhurhur. I shouldn't comment mid-read, but I can't help it XD.
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  • From ANON - qwerty on June 12, 2009
    Interesting story so far. I can't wait to see what Madara has up his sleeve!
    Keep going!
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  • From butterflies1974 on June 09, 2009
    Sweet story!I like this story a lot and look forward to more. Thank you for a great chapter.
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  • From arabuzumaki on May 17, 2009
    oh what the hell did naru go through O.O his former Dom was a sick fellow. is it Oro? that's the first person that came to mind.

    and the issue with sasu it just seems like he isn't wanted by naru. i know itachi is his fav but it's like he doesn't like sasuke at all!!! is it the fact that he is trying to break him out of being a pain-slut because of all he has been through? i hope sasuke gets some love later on, i want naru to keep him as well.
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  • From ANON - Anon on May 10, 2009
    It would love to see their bonding ceremony.
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  • From ANON - ZN18 on May 10, 2009
    wOOt. :> Can't wait for more of this and haha Sasuke keeps acting like a douche at the wrong times.
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  • From ANON - Ivy on May 10, 2009
    The moment between Itachi and Naruto was so touching! You usually read Itachi as a dom in d/s stories so this take on him is refreshing ^_^ Can't wait for the next chapter!
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  • From Ch3Ch3ls on May 06, 2009
    OMG!!! so fucking hot!!!!!!! please update soon!!! i wanna know the punishment for Sasuke
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  • From nivell on May 04, 2009
    Awww hot! I want to see Sasuslut taking it hard!!
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  • From arabuzumaki on May 03, 2009
    wow i think he was way to harsh on itachi. he is a very good sub after all. but that was way too harsh. maybe he can make it up to him?
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  • From LadySesshoumaru on May 03, 2009
    DAMN!!! naurto as Dom is so fucking hot and to the two sexy as hell uchiha brothers that's just the icing on the cake... i alwayz thought that itachi would make the perfect sub though.....great job....can't wait for the next update.
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  • From Raholea on May 03, 2009
    *blinks* i finally get the chance to read chapter 2, and like, fifteen minutes later, i see you've added more!!!
    i love fast updates, but readers can't be bitchy about the slow ones, either. lol

    This is looking good and i'd love to see more. if you'd like help doing quick edits pick on me, i'm good on grammer, punctuation, spelling- the general stuff. ^^


    Keep writing!!
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