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Reviews for The Art of Patience

By : yolotengo
  • From serenagold on August 06, 2009
    Awww.. I loved Naruto and Sasuke's passionate gentile lovemaking. Sasuke was so vulnerable in this chapter. I loved it.

    Keep up the great work!
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  • From serenagold on August 06, 2009
    :D (waiting for part 2/3)
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  • From ANON - Nami on August 01, 2009
    XD I'm sort of with the other poster who said maybe Sasuke should just be Kiba's sub. He's gotten the shortest end of the stick in this chapter, choked, scared witless, unable to evoke any emotions or snapping out of it responses, scratched, hit, then was witness to a moment between Naruto and Itachi XD. If I was him, and I ain't and thankfully he has his inner self respect, but I'd be feeling like eight layers of not good enough combined with third wheel XD. Add to the fact that he doesn't know anything (about Orochi or seemingly anyone related to Naruto, and even his own uncle who he never met till today. He only seems to be picking up signals, and I feel oddly like he's in an even more vulnerable position than Itachi never mind his physical position in the threesome given his lack of knowledge. This chapter pretty much cemented it, too).

    Haha. I think Sasuke, in this, is the character I've latched onto emotionally XD. I always latch onto the characters on the short end, cause it's fun (either to see them miserable and getting into worse situations so I can cry about it which I enjoy for some reason, or see things get better so I can cheer for them which I enjoy equally XD).

    Is it all an exciting build up to something 8D? Will Sasuke voice any jealousy or just bear it silently? Give up? Keep on doing what he's doing? Why did Itachi pick up that scalpel? So curious XDDD.
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  • From butterflies1974 on July 19, 2009
    Oh, my god that was awesome. I am so glad that Kiba hit Oorchimaru. That was brilliant.
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  • From SheaButter on July 19, 2009
    To tell you the truth I was never a big ItaNaruSasu fan, (I'm a die hard ItaSasu fan :D ) but this story really hooked me in. I just love how you chracterize them and everything. I can't wait til the next chapter 8)
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  • From nivell on July 19, 2009
    I felt so sorry for poor Sasuke in the last chapter! Getting scratched and punched by Naruto when he was trying to keep him away from getting into bigger trouble..maybe Sasuke should be with Kiba, ;p

    Can't wait for the next chappy!
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  • From nm1716 on July 18, 2009
    I love the update bad guys left out cold, always a good thing. Now need to get Sai away to, maybe with Kiba. I can't wait to see what happens next. PLEASE UPDATE AGAIN REALLY SOON!!!!
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  • From Wawuxchan on July 18, 2009
    OH MY GOD!!!! I LOVE EVERYTHING!!!!!!!!!!!
    But ine thing that definitly needs to be said is that KIBA is soooooo awesome!!!
    Come on we need morer Kiba Action!!!Maybe get him a sub too???????
    PLEASE I LOVE THE WAY YOU WRITE HIM!!!!!!!!
    THANKS!!!
    L O V E
    W A W U
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  • From ANON - qwerty on July 18, 2009
    Is Naruto's old Dom Pein? Jiraiya?
    Good start to the party. I love how Naruto puts subs and Doms alike in their places!
    Keep going!
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  • From arabuzumaki on July 17, 2009
    ohhh the suspense will kill me i tell you lol. i have 3 guesses - oro, pein or hmmm danzou? hmm i have no idea, i'll go crazy guessing. put me out of my misery quick!!!
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  • From ANON - Anon on July 17, 2009
    Orichimaru
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  • From ANON - qwerty on July 13, 2009
    AH! I love the outfits! They're so hott!
    All this build-up to the party is killing me!
    Keep going!
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  • From serenagold on June 30, 2009
    woo hoo!

    I wonder what sort of sadistic treat Naruto has for Sasuke in the way of clothing. >:) lol

    Keep up the good work!
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  • From ANON - qwerty on June 28, 2009
    I cannot wait to see the outfits!
    Great chapter! Keep going!
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  • From arabuzumaki on June 28, 2009
    that was awesome. i can't wait to see their outfits. and i can't wait until naru meets sai again ^_^
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