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Reviews for The Art of Patience

By : yolotengo
  • From NarutoVixin on November 16, 2009
    oh dear the bad guys still dont under stand that they cant walk all over people like Naruto when ever they want too
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  • From ANON - Izzy_chan on November 02, 2009
    At first I wasn't going to read your story when I saw how many chapters it was (me being a fan of one and two-shots) but your summary was really interesting. I am glad I gave this a chance, your story is amazing. I absolutely love how detailed the characters and story are. Also, about the latest chapter with the strawberry thing, HAWT! Please continue to keep up the great work! I am totally looking forward to the next chapter.
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  • From ANON - :) on October 20, 2009
    Black Kisame and a necklace a character has never taken off since the first meeting someone, and being exchanged or given during slave ship? Someone's been reading D/s Naruto! Which ain't a bad thing at all.

    But it's pretty cool, your fic I mean.
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  • From serenagold on October 16, 2009
    Visually stunning, but I think I'd pass on that dessert. Thanks anyway. ^^
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  • From ANON - Hisak0 on October 15, 2009
    Damn, i am not used with adultfiction so I have to look for the review tab hehe

    anyway....... Damn it!!! You got me hanging their...

    I love this, love your story and your smexy smuts & lemons haha...

    anyway, I am not sure how I am going put this on some alert but I'll be chasing this story down for your next update! xxx

    Cheers!

    ^^
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  • From TwilightNaiad on October 12, 2009
    The milk part sounded fun, not sure about the strawberries. But since it is Sasuke, Itachi, and Naruto, sure go for it. I liked the character portrayal in the chapter, with what they were thinking and feeling. Good job on the chapter and story so far. Keep it going.
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  • From nivell on October 12, 2009
    Wow, this chapter was super hot! I can't stop thinking about the sexy image of strawberries coming out of Sasuke's ass and Itachi eating them!
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  • From NarutoVixin on October 11, 2009
    hmm my mind is lost in a fog trying to think just what Naruto has planed for those to very naughty boys of his
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  • From jordash00 on October 07, 2009
    My threesome sense is tingling! Yea!
    Unfortunately behind it looms the shadow of unrest because of the snake and Madara!
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  • From TwilightNaiad on October 05, 2009
    Yay, Sasuke gets to join in! Thanks for working him in.
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  • From NarutoVixin on October 05, 2009
    mm but your not suppose to play with your food *evil glint in eyes* still food play is soo much fun thank you for giving me some ideas
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  • From Animehedonist on September 30, 2009
    Okay I just started this tonight but this whole thing has made me squeal in joy. Especially with Sai being Naruto's first sub that makes me so happy and I was so mad when I found Madara got his paws on him. (I have a huge weakspot for Sai almost as big as Narutos in the fic) I fondly wish Kiba perhaps inherits Sai or he goes to him but this is just going really well. I feel so dirty yet so happy whenever I picture Itachi in those clothes you put him in I love it. There were some minor blips but it was good enough that I don't recall any big ones right now as far as grammar or spelling goes. The aftercare and just care that is shown in the fic makes me really tempted to pimp this out. And long review is long... go me.
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  • From NarutoVixin on September 26, 2009
    oh my umm *fans self* i hope you hook up Kiba and Sai and maby move Naruto in with his 2 little slaves couse man oh man is this story hotter then july in the south
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  • From ANON - Nami on September 25, 2009
    D'aww.... little Sasuke is getting more mature ;~; *hearts*. It was really nice of him to give up that time that, while it could have been a valid excuse, to say it's Itachi's time. It really shows his love for his big brother, and not just Naruto.

    But poor Sasuke. His anxiety attacks and the reason he was so mad was explained really well. But, yaaay, Naruto is back! And now Itachi's delayed happy time will resume next chapter :D!
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  • From TwilightNaiad on September 25, 2009
    Whoa, Sasuke has some serious separation-anxiety issues. Nice chapter though.
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