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Reviews for Angels Don't Lie

By : teasetillyoudrop
  • From ANON - Toni on January 15, 2011
    Amazing. I commenting on your part one over at FF.NET under HugAZombie. I hope you post more over there soon - easier to keep track :)
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  • From Eremi22 on July 02, 2010
    I noticed it's been a while since you updated, and wanted to remind you of this fic in case you forgot. And to let you know that I can't wait for the next update ^_^
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  • From ANON - desiderata on March 18, 2010
    I saw this fic on the 'newly up-dated' home page and by-passed it because I am not familiar with sci-fi and the space police bit sound kinda quirky. But then I stumbled across your 'This thing we don't call love' fic and loved it. It was sweet and endearing, but not dull. It was believable and very well written. I really enjoyed it, so thank you for taking the time to share and up-load your work. It made me smile and I greatly appreciate it!

    Having read that, I recognized that you were the same author of this sci-fi fic. You sparked my interest and now I just had to read about some space officers. You're brilliant. I really like your style, characterizations, and the over all story. I'm sorry I was so harsh to judge initially.

    The time skips fit and mesh perfectly. Your diction is spot on. The dialog is well balanced and paced. I also love Sasuke's mini-asides you have in italics. You really are creating a universe of your own, but you don't lose me as a reader while you introduce us to this new realm. The story is fantastical, but contained and suspends disbelief. I hope your real life is good, and when you have time are able to continue with this piece. : ]

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  • From ANON - Anon on March 18, 2010
    Can't wait to see the next chapter
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  • From meowkuu2 on March 16, 2010
    woot! So far I'm loving your fic (are you surrree its your first?? ^_^) I do have to point out one little thing though (I'm not sure if its been said yet), in the first chapter you had Sasuke call Kakasah a "masochist" when I think you meant to write "sadist". A masochist is someone who enjoys pain (misery or the like) being inflicted on them self while a Sadist is one who enjoys causing others pain (misery or the like). Going off of context I think Sasuke was referring to how Kakashi seems to enjoy tormenting him?..hence Kakashi is a sadist. hope that helps ^_^ and keep on writing i can't wait till ur next upadate ^_^
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  • From ANON - lilworros on August 30, 2009
    This is so great!! I love it and I agree with you there should be more stories like this!! I love you moody, slightly uncertain sasuke, your wonderful naruto and I can't wait for more! Please more and I was wondering if you could email me the next time you post a chapter because I do not want to miss anything of this wonderful story. allidoislie@msn.com
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  • From sonotgoingthere on August 24, 2009
    You've updated! I'm glad. I really love the cyper punk genre, and love Naruto in it. I'm just not so good a writing it!

    Fantastic Chapter.
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  • From ANON - GoldenPig on August 24, 2009
    please no robot sex, the worst sex ever!!!!! DON'T DO IT PLEASE DON'T DO IT!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Anon on August 21, 2009
    I love that, cyber storys are so rare... and I like the interaction between Sasuke and Naruto so far! Keep up the good work! :)
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  • From ANON - SamuraiSaaya on August 21, 2009
    Oh I didn't mean anything specific when I said confusing! Just in general I guess, but I am understanding the surroundings and plot as the story goes on. So no fretting from you my friend!

    Loved the new chapter. Though you blindsided me when you said they were twelve! For some reason I thought they were older? Hmm. I'm just delusional of course.

    I love the little attraction thing that's starting between Naruto and Sasuke. Definitely promising.

    Looking out for the next chapter! ^^
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  • From cynaga on August 21, 2009
    So much fun and so well written. Please continue indefinitely. :) THX!
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  • From serenagold on August 21, 2009
    This is an extremely interesting and refreshingly new plot. I'd love to know more about the world you've created and I love the characters and their interactions. Naruto's great in this and I love the Neji/Sasuke rival thing.

    Keep up the great work!
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  • From ANON - yaoilover on August 21, 2009
    kool story, but i want to ask wat are hires? b-c i keep on thinking that they r androids of such even though naruto is sorta human
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  • From Halskr on August 20, 2009
    Alright, another cool chapter. Make the pirates those sound kids from the chunnin exams. That one hunchbacked guy dosu or seki or something like that. He would make a cool alien! Although the spider guy from the Sound 4 would also make a creepy alien too!
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  • From sonotgoingthere on May 29, 2009
    You're right - there isn't enough Naruto Cyberpunk out there. I'm glad you've chosen to write your own. Great first chapter!
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