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Reviews for Tourist Trap

By : inuspike
  • From Animehedonist on August 17, 2009
    Some minor nit picks that would likely have been caught by a beta but all in all a nice fun romp. If you want to fix the minor errors I'd use conscience instead of 'continence' at one part (continence brings to mind old people with bladder problem diapers *cough*) and 'think sunshine' was the ending of a sentence that probably should have been to do with the nice thick sunshininess of Naruto's hair. Other than the errors and the lack of new paragraph for the switch of characters speaking it was fun reading this. I enjoyed the details like the mention of Naruto rubbing as well as hitting Itachi's prostate during the sex because seriously that is how the gland works. And I couldn't help but picture Jiraiya being the owner of the travel company just because though it probably wasn't him.
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  • From Strailo on May 28, 2009
    *pounces and snuggles tightly* Yay!! You're here! And I didn't even know it! How dare you disappear!

    Anyways, I still love your writing. *smiles and beams* And I hope that you still love mine. Yes, I'm working on more...and your requests. I think one of yours was up next to boot...*looks* Yep. The Chad/Ichi is next on my list. *nods* *beams brightly at you*

    Hope to see more (including that one Aizen/Ichi that was promised...popsicle? remember? *bats eyes*)
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  • From butterflies1974 on April 23, 2009
    I am not usually a fan of Uke Itachi but I liked this story. You really did well with the whole they must be strangers but it ends up that they are boyfriends and I have to day that I liked the aggressive Naruto. Thank you for a fine read.
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