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Reviews for Bushido

By : EmeraldElf
  • From kuramasgirl on July 13, 2009
    Hey there... I'm new here. Well not really I just recently got a log in name. I really like your story. You should update soon.
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  • From ANON - youji_yola on April 18, 2009
    DDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD:

    Man, right from the get go I feel sad for Naruto. The fact that he blamed his dead grandfather for his situation makes it more obvious that he doesn't want to let go of his grandfather, even though it sounds like he's just being selfish and thinking only of leaving everything behind. Cause the start is a solemn and grieving Naruto, it's hard to gauge if he's in character but his seriousness reminds me of Sandaime's funeral.

    I was surprised about Ten-Ten being his nurse (I've never thought of her as a nurturing type) and I'm curious why you chose her to be his nurse, considering that she's a weapon specialist in canon.

    Who are his grandparents? Are they just made up? And why was Naruto, (and his grandma?) sent away to live in Japan? Maybe I just didn't notice but how old is Naruto? Ten-Ten refers to him as little boss but he sounds so mature, aside from the moment where he's angry at his grandfather.

    The only reason I have so many questions is cause you left things ambiguous (purposely no doubt) but you do write real well and each sentence flows so smoothly. Can't wait for the next update with, hopefully, less emo. T______T

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  • From ANON - plaidshp on April 17, 2009
    I am interested in seeing where this is going :P. Do you have an account on y!gallery?
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  • From ANON - Dragon on April 17, 2009
    Wow. This sounds very promising! I look forward to your next update!!
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