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By : Ljiljana
  • From dolphina23 on April 28, 2009
    Oh I can't wait for more! Especially as I know a little bit of what's coming. . .

    I loved Sasuke's descent into madness, or else the trials of suffering a haunting. I love also that it really could, at this point, still be taken either way. It's almost reminiscent of Hide and Seek. I don't know if you are familiar with the film or the book, but there are elements to your story that are just as creepy and, for lack of a better word, haunting.

    Lily, my dear Lily, I do so enjoy how you portray your characters. They speak of such heavy things at times, and yet usually with such dark humor or nonchalance that it almost escapes the reader what a stain it could truly be to their well being. And yet, there is always a sense of hope, as if salvation could really come in the form of love. I really think it's unique, how you symbolize it. I also think that the pace of the relationship is well set, not too fast, but right on track.

    Now, if only your fingers would acquire the speed of the Gods, so I can have more to delve my own fingers into, like kneeding a tough bread-dough. I worry it, and it gives me terrific terror elements that, for moments, have me wanting to double check all the dark places. It works so well here, and yet is a different horror style than your other story, Never Leave Me, which I recomend to anyone reading the review section.

    A friend of mine once told me that they could not drive late at night, or get to sleep inside that dead hour, if they watched a particularly good horror flick. Your stories, the way you delve properly into the psyche as well as the things that could, possibly, (if you're unlucky enough) go bump in the night, are like that. Here's to bumping back, so I can have at least one more go at the horrors you are sure to create.
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  • From LadyWolf on April 26, 2009
    The crazy shit is about to hit the fan now!!!

    Can't wait!!!

    Post soon!
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  • From Prism0467 on April 26, 2009
    So...Sasuke's finally flipped his wig. That day was coming.

    Great chapter.
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  • From ANON - youji_yola on April 18, 2009
    LOL finally reading it for fun. (Although I saw stuff that I missed. D:)

    Any reason why you mentioned Naruto's cherry popping other than something memorable during the vacation? Aka someone who's somewhat important to the story? (Sai? XD)

    My heart's been stolen by your Kakashi. He's so perverted but, at the same time, as observant as ever. I bet he let Naruto hear that night with Obito on purpose just to get a laugh. I mean, Naruto thinks he didn't mean it but Kakashi's a perv so I'll believe otherwise. XD

    Itachi's funny too. I admire his ability to look serious and snark while being somewhat respectful. Wish I could do that without smiling. And the married comment... me thinks he's not happy either. XD

    Naruto's so accommodating of everyone, charming and insightful. I love how Naruto has to keep saying that he promised to behave... he trying to convince himself to behave? And also... "He half-turned, just enough to show me a smirk – one of those that make a stomach quiver in the way that I really didn’t want to associate with Obito’s bastardly nephew. " Ahaha, Naruto got done in by Sasuke's arrogantly sexy smirk. XD

    Sasuke's still the love-able bastard that I we all know. Wonder what was in his bag that he had to barge in on Naruto's bath time (if he wasn't meaning to peep). I mean, he gave up looking for it when Naruto started to get angry and if he'd give up that quickly... it doesn't sound important enough to barge in on someone. And smaller Sasuke... dunno why I like that idea/image. XD

    Pinning Sasuke to the sink... yummy image. |D

    Favorite quote for this part... "Kakashi whispered, but not low enough for people to miss it if they paid attention. “You know what would help you two get along better?” Some dramatically pausing later, he answered his own question. “A nice bottle of some scented lube.”" The moment I read this, I fell in love with Kakashi. Usually I'm indifferent to Kakashi but this... made of pure win. XD

    Still curious as to what the quote has to do with the story in general and can't want for the next part. I wanna know how Naruto fixes his mistake, especially since asshole Sasuke is so much better than Ice queen Sasuke. And, can I assume the cute kitty is Kyuubi? XD
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  • From LadyWolf on April 17, 2009
    I almost felt a twinge of guilt when Naruto let the cat into Sasuke's room, then the bastard opened his mouth...!

    Post more!!! Please!!!
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  • From dolphina23 on April 16, 2009
    Yea, it's here! Finally! Personally, I love that you inject a lot of emotionality in your work. It makes it much more intriguing to read. I absolutely love the snobbish and arrogant rich boy complex from Sasuke. It fits him so well and is perfect for a spoiled rich boy. I've seen other stories that never even touch the possiblity, or pull in the haughtiness of the manga but write it off as Sasuke being rich and, because of that, a veritable asshole to Naruto the entire way through. You know how I hate romances that use the abuse as some sort of attractiveness, especially if that author's version of Naruto is decidely NOT a masochist. I can't wait to see more, to get into the subtle suspense that it so artful coming from you. I absolutely love this story, and anything else you do with the supernatural.

    If I could request a fic from you dealing with anything from that genre, I would never let up, you do it so well. I like Itchi here too, for as little as we see him. He's done well, not the egomaniacal maniac or sadistic torture rapist as he is in so many other stories. but there's still something off about him that Naruto picks up on; I think it's great. I love that you've got Naruto's inherent senitivity to others feelings as well as his innate ability to read people well. Oh, and Kakashi and Obito, both alone and when interacting with each other, are great too.

    I can't wait for the next part, doesn't matter that I've alreaday read it. Update soon!
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  • From Prism0467 on April 16, 2009
    You have a fondness for revealing the psychological and emotional complexity of the interaction between Naruto and Sasuke from Naruto's point of view. Why is that? It always seems as though Naruto is treating his emotions like polite company.

    Anyway, great tale, as always.
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