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Reviews for Our Lives

By : Raelyn
  • From Hotanimeguysfan on May 28, 2011
    I just LOVE LOVE LOVE this story!!!
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  • From ANON - moodysavage on June 10, 2010
    Wow. That got me immediately. I started crying at the end of that first sequence. I think this story is perfect just the way it is. You have quite a way with making the reader connect to your characters. Some people can write a ton and the reader just can't connect or care about the characters. But you...you can write something so short & I CARE about the characters. That's true talent. Please keep writing because I love your writing.
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  • From ANON - Timber on May 14, 2010
    Raelyn
    You have such a gift!! Your words make me cry my head off in grief or grin like an idiot over how happy I am with the story!! This story had me doing both!! First part had me in tears and in total denial that it was happening and feeling helpless with the characters to do anything about it. Then some serious grief at the complete finality it made me feel. Then the last part and the looking forward to how it would unfold just had me glued to my computer monitor. I just love this whole concept of them finding each other again and again!!! There is just something really romantic and sweet about that!! Its like they have so much love that one life time is not enough to express it!! HAPPY This made me really happy!!!
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  • From BumbleBee435 on March 26, 2010
    Kawaii! Really a great story!
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  • From GudenMulle on August 23, 2009
    AAAAAAWWW!!
    Oh my GOD!
    I was near tears, and I don't know why!
    This was, like.. perfect! can't beleive it!
    Could I ask you to write a sequel?
    I'd love to hear more about how those two handle each other in 'our' time.
    Thank you so so much for this fic, I'm all mushy now :)
    Even though I don't beleive in soulmates.. weird, huh?
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  • From ANON - Anon on April 15, 2009
    Wow I really liked that. At first I was not sure and then the transition and having them meet up was done really well, Iliked how Naruto tested it by just the one word, "Bastard?" :) I like the ending too, but at the same time I wish there was a bit more.
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  • From blugirlami21 on April 14, 2009
    Awww, that was so cute, I want to read more. The beginning with them in old Konoha and their baby girl, that was awesome, I wanna read more of that. I wanna know what happened, how they had the baby, how they were so easily killed. And then when they meet again, I could feel the connection that two have shared both in the past and right now in the present. I wanna know how their date is going to go, I wanna see everyone's reactions, especially Sakura's and Ino's. I love reincarnation stories especially when it involves soul mates and when those soul mates are Sasuke and Naruto. Great job, did I mention that I wished there was more?
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  • From ANON - babe on April 14, 2009
    that has got to be he sweetest thing ever! nice.........
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