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Reviews for The Weight of the Heart

By : Daydreamer79
  • From flameofthenight on April 13, 2009
    I cant wait to see what the priests will do when they find out Itachi has their god's son.
    Mwahahaha.
    At any rate great chap. I must request that you dont turn Naruto into s submissive personality (not nessesarily sexual either.)
    Although when ity comes to sex switches just seem more realistic.
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  • From on April 13, 2009
    OMG! It was so good I soooo love your story! I love the time of the pharaos and now combined with a cute Naruto and a gorgeous Itachi! WOW! You have me there..love it :)
    Update soon and your other story too *many hugs*
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  • From Rockyshores on April 12, 2009
    I really like this story. Egyptian mythology has always fascinated me so it is interesting to see your interpretation of it. Can't wait to read more!
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  • From BitterApples on April 12, 2009
    Ah, I love this story!

    It's really incredibly unusual from most other stories here, I don't think there is another like this, which makes it even better, poor naruto, it seems like he's going to have a hard time saving Itachi xD

    Pleasee Update soon!
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  • From satterb on April 12, 2009
    This is amazing! I love ancient mythology, especially egyptian. Oh, the cleverness of you! I will be keeping an eye on this fic. As you know, I'm also enjoying the other fic you are writing at the moment. Thanks for posting!
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  • From serenagold on April 08, 2009
    I was pretty impressed with this story. Your use of the Egyptian mythology felt legitimate, you know? You really fleshed out and humanized the gods in a way I've never seen before. I like this whole set up.


    Keep up the great work. I can't wait to see where you go with this.
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  • From Ikippiki on April 07, 2009
    You certainly have the most wonderful ideas! I was impressed with your other fic and I'm flabbegasted by this one lol. I just can't wait to read more! I'm delighted by the fact that I know you never leave us pending for too long.
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  • From ANON - Word_Slave on April 07, 2009
    I wanted to review here too! this way more people will read... I hope. Kisses! you are amazing!
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  • From ANON - Anon on April 07, 2009
    This intro chapter was bloody amazing! I really can't wait to see what happens!
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  • From ItaNarulover on April 07, 2009
    ItaNaru, yay!!!!!! *cheers*
    And not only that, but what a great start to an excellent story, I love it!
    I've always loved the Egyptian mythology and combining it with Naruto is genius. It's incredibly unique because the fics of the Egyptian sort have mostly involved the pairing SasuNaru or other Het pairings, so putting ItaNaru in a story like this is highly appreciated and wanted. I also think it was a great idea to make Naruto Anubis son, and you portrayed every character in a believable way. I tend to dislike an evil Itachi but I in this I don't mind because I know Naruto will probably make him a good guy again.
    Please don't take too long on the update, I really anticipating the continuation.
    Keep up with the good work and good luck with the writing.
    Take care. Hugs =^_^=
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  • From dino1 on April 07, 2009
    This story is so cool! You doing well in getting the mind set of the time period. I wonder why Itachi thought when he killed the adviser, what set him off about being a child molester? He must of like them really young considering the time period.
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  • From KeelarChan on April 07, 2009
    This was sheer genius.
    I've never been a fan of Naruto/Itachi so initally I was put off.
    But I thought this sounds like an orginal story, so whats the harm?

    And now I'm glad I read it!
    You write beautifully. You manage to keep Naruto and Itachi in character when they're completely out of their normal element.
    I'm in awe of your skill and will be waiting patiently for the next installment of this amazing fanfiction.

    ~Keelar
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  • From on April 07, 2009
    WOW! I love "What Dreams May Come" and this story sounds just as good as it. I´m excited what will happen and I really hope you update soon^^
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  • From flameofthenight on April 07, 2009
    OMG! Fan girl squeal!
    Im very into Egyptian Mythology. And this.. well Ive never heard of a fanfic that takes then bent. Im sooo excited!
    Please dont let Itachi find out who Naruto is too too soon. I think the buildup would be fabulous!
    And if you need a beta for this just holla!
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