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Reviews for The Weight of the Heart

By : Daydreamer79
  • From on June 08, 2009
    I've been reading this story without logging in(i'm lazy). But I definently like what i'm reading. I think that Madra's gone to far this time. He knows he can angry or hurt Itachi but who much has he really thought about what Sasuke is capable of. If he (sasuke) gets to mad someones gonna have hell to pay. Anyway keep up the good work.

    Till next time
    Yami
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  • From on June 04, 2009
    Please Please please please! It is SOOOOOO good, seriously! I have never seen a story as brilliant as this one! Please continue!!! ^^
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  • From ItaNarulover on June 03, 2009
    No, Naruto! Poor baby! Q_Q
    I hope he will survive, though something tells me he will considering he's the son of Anubis, but I'm at the edge of my seat nevertheless. I just want to find Madara and stab him. How dare he try to kill my two favorite characters? *runs around in circles trying to find him* ;)
    I really loved this chapter. You managed to add a lot of historical and mythological events and customs that I wasn't aware of, so it was really interesting to learn about. The coronation part, the clothes and jewelry, the people in the palace and so on.
    The interaction between Itachi and Naruto just makes my day, I love the heated tension between them. You're really one of the few who manage to describe it so thoroughly, it's a pleasure to read and I enjoy each and every chapter.
    Also, I love how Sasuke and Naruto still manages to have that bickering rivalry friendship that they have in the manga/anime, it makes the story all the more realistic and amusing. I also like how Sasuke isn't falling in love with Naruto yet or ever, because ItaNaru with onesided SasuNaru is quite common, so I like how this story differ from them with that aspect as well.
    Can't wait for the next chapter, I'm anxiously waiting for more.
    Keep up with the good work and good luck with the writing.
    Take care. Hugs =^_^=
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  • From hup on June 03, 2009
    ah itachi is being sweet. if Naruto dies his niceness will disapear forever.
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  • From dhur on June 03, 2009
    YAy for new chappie!! I'm not expecting naruto to die because well.that's just sending him back home but definitely can't wait to see how itachi reacts and when naruto gets to use his full potential! =D Thanks for the update!! keep up the good work!
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  • From ItaNarulover on May 30, 2009
    I'm so sorry for not reviewing after each chapter, but I've been away for quite some time now, and it hurts my heart to see that I've missed these incredible chapters.
    This is totally one of my favorite ItaNaru-fanfics of all time. You're an amazing authoress, the way you're describing the characters, the surroundings and the mythological aspects is phenomenal, it's like reading a novel, and not just some ordinary novel but a great one. You seem to be really educated in the Egyptian mythology because everything is so realistic and convincing, and I really appreciate that in a fanfic.
    It's also got a nice flow and it's easy to read, the plot is unique and interesting, and I just love it to death.
    I've added this to my recommended fics on my profile, because I do truly recommend it. Thank you so much for writing this! *sends bouquets of roses, chocolates and plushies*
    Can't wait for the next chapter, I'm at the edge of my seat waiting for the continuation.
    Keep up with the good work and good luck with the writing. Remember to relax and take your time, do not exert yourself just to satisfy some rabid fangirls or fanboys. ;P You have to think about yourself as well!
    Take care. Hugs =^_^=
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  • From ShinigamiClara on May 24, 2009
    wahhh and so Madara shows himself, and Itachi is his possessive self once again... i'd hate to be naruto in that position... although i wonder what powers (other than the ability to change people's hearts) does naru-chan have? him being the son of Anubis and all that... anyways! please please update soon! i'm looking forward to the next chapter! now... if only i can get mom and dad to turn down that damned TV so i can sleep... i have work tomorrow damn it!!
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  • From Maxentius on May 14, 2009
    As a history major with a particular interest in the Nile Valley civilizations, I'm very much enjoying this fic. And not only for the setting. The story itself has been compelling enough to have me checking fairly regularly for updates. All I can say is keep it up :D

    P.S. In case you weren't aware, the ancient Egyptian scimitar is called a khopesh, and the length of the mummification process was 70 days... to match the rotation of the star Sirius.
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  • From Ikippiki on May 14, 2009
    Hehe Itachi is falling and falling hard for our little blond god! (who wouldn't?) I can't wait to see what happens during the coronation and what will happen with madara! And I'm REALLY looking forward to the promised lemon :)
    Good work!
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  • From auronsgirlfriend on May 14, 2009
    hee heee somebody's yearing for some affection i can tell from the frustration in the begining.
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  • From dhur on May 14, 2009
    I definitely look forward to reading this every week!! I love how you build up to the suspense of having naruto and itachi together. I also love how naruto is someone special and still keeps his determined qualities. I just hope Naruto can protect himself and itachi =P I LOVE the story please keep up the good work!!!!

    P.S i'm sad when i check on friday, sat and sun and it's not there.
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  • From serenagold on May 13, 2009
    Hahaha.. I loved the part where Naruto splashed Sasuke with water. ^^
    Keep up the great work!
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  • From auronsgirlfriend on May 05, 2009
    great chapter!
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  • From Ikippiki on May 04, 2009
    Hehe go Naru! go Naru! go Naru! You can save him!!
    lol
    Ok, sorry for this bout of crazyness, I couldn't help myself.. This story is so interesting and original! I can't wait to read more!
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  • From fairietayle on May 02, 2009
    I have nothing but good things to say of this story.
    I love the creative set up and the seamless blending of it all :D The characters are love ^-^ And the flow is lovely. The plot moves with its own pace and twists as it wills - and it's perfect ;)
    Love, love, love!
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